1. Post #1
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    blah2's Avatar
    August 2005
    1,661 Posts

    Still working on it.


    I really appreciate criticism and such.

  2. Post #2
    bbdude's Avatar
    March 2005
    22 Posts
    I'd put WIP in the thread title. The intro is kinda boring, and it's disappointing that it just trails onto the main parts. Maybe once it gets the shiny coat of final production it'll be more appealing. You know, sweep ups and downs and "all that jazz". I'll let it go because it's WIP. Song gets a lot better after around 2:00, although that "ding ding ding" synth is really lame. Melodies aren't really varied and don't grab my attention after it hits the first time. Nice use of white noise. Perhaps the bass synth could be more powerful with a bigger presence?