1. Post #1
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    It was not worth making this song, it has 140 bpm 2step drum patterns I made so it's garage 2-step I believe, but less sub bass. I'll put that in later.
    I stayed up all night making this pos, now I feel all weird and I know I have to sleep eventually uuughh.

    http://kpence.bandcamp.com/track/im-a-zombie-now It's really bad.

  2. Post #2

    December 2011
    391 Posts
    none of the links work for me :/

  3. Post #3
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Lemme try bandcamp

    Edited:

    Lemme try bandcamp, that's weird, bandcamp doesn't accept mp3, lemme re-render in wav oh boy

    Edited:

    What do you recommend for you music fp? Wav or mp3, I've been doing mp3 for some reason.
    Edit: It's taking quite a while to upload

    :|


    I can break the ice by critiquing it myself, one of the snare sounds like a dog exhaling through his nose, there's little sub, the bassline dissappears at the some point, there's too much treble. The drums are maybe a little quiet. Poorly mixed

    So close I can taste it!

    Edited:

    http://kpence.bandcamp.com/track/im-a-zombie-now YAY!

    Edited:

    Chords are strange, I put them in as if they were a sequence of notes but all at once and then it sounds nice.

  4. Post #4
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
    Dead Madman's Avatar
    December 2008
    5,644 Posts
    The main melody was certainly lovely, you just need to get rid of those horrid wobbley things the background, apart from that, this song's pretty good!

  5. Post #5
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    The main melody was certainly lovely, you just need to get rid of those horrid wobbley things the background, apart from that, this song's pretty good!
    Thanks! Should I get rid of them when become the melody though- nvm I realized that they don't wobble at higher pitch (Its Chromatic wave on massive it sounds pretty weird)


    I put a lot of filters on the one string sample I nears in the later half so it doesn't sound out of place. It's a big song though so I'm not gonna update yet, just warning people before they mention it.

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    Wow do I feel pathetic, I'm literally f5 ing until I get a response

  6. Post #6
    dubstep
    SCopE5000's Avatar
    August 2005
    4,192 Posts
    Kind of cool.

    I skipped through lots of it because it's 14 minutes, but what I heard was good, apart from towards the end, it gets too jarring and painful on the ears around 10:00-12:00 mark..

  7. Post #7
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Kind of cool.

    I skipped through lots of it because it's 14 minutes, but what I heard was good, apart from towards the end, it gets too jarring and painful on the ears around 10:00-12:00 mark..
    Okay, I could even just cut that out, it definitely doesn't need to be as long as it is.
    Is the treble to high? I'm going to cut off the high ends right now, thank you for feeback

    Edited:

    Jeez, I'm realizing how bad this is