1. Post #1
    The Jackel's Avatar
    May 2011
    943 Posts
    Story line :

    You are Jake, your wife was passed away a while ago with mysterious secret behind it.

    You have nightmares every night after she passed away in your bathroom, you have never actually take a shower after her death.






    That, is you.

    The bald guy lying on the floor in this small room with no decoration.




    You woke up in this room, without knowing that you're in your dream.



    "Where am I? "



    Suddenly, the door opens, you see a pair of wierd looking feet.


    It's your horrible looking wife that passed away.

    "JAAAKEE!"




    You look directly at this horrible looking woman.





    "So short."





    What should Jake do now?
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  2. Post #2
    SJW 4 lyfe
    DaysBefore's Avatar
    December 2009
    7,342 Posts
    Kill yourself.
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  3. Post #3
    The Jackel's Avatar
    May 2011
    943 Posts
    Kill yourself.
    I know this is horrible, but it's my first comic.
    Give me a chance, please.
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  4. Post #4
    SJW 4 lyfe
    DaysBefore's Avatar
    December 2009
    7,342 Posts
    Alright.

    Throw the toilet paper at the... thing, and run away while it's distracted.

  5. Post #5
    Gold Member
    SNNS-SEAN's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,688 Posts
    Retrieve arms.
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  6. Post #6
    Dumpster Duke
    Back_Slash's Avatar
    July 2009
    12,356 Posts
    eat the horrible looking woman.

  7. Post #7
    Gold Member
    Hyzo's Avatar
    February 2008
    646 Posts
    drink your own urine, in an attempt to fight off dehydration from being asleep for several hours
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  8. Post #8
    A six sided fish cube of the Flounder variety
    TheGoodDoctorF's Avatar
    March 2010
    3,183 Posts
    Clean your face. You look absolutely filthy. No way to look when meeting with your ex-wife.

  9. Post #9
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    CorporalCupCake's Avatar
    October 2010
    599 Posts
    Your wife needs love to dispell her evil. Bone her.    No pun intended   
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  10. Post #10
    Ask me about my Marvel/DC fetish
    AaronM202's Avatar
    May 2010
    17,994 Posts
    Intense violent rape.
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  11. Post #11
    SuperFly8anzai's Avatar
    May 2011
    83 Posts
    Underhell?
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  12. Post #12
    The Jackel's Avatar
    May 2011
    943 Posts
    Alright.

    Throw the toilet paper at the... thing, and run away while it's distracted.
    As your wife came closer and closer, you are getting frightened.


    You picked up the toilet papers beside you, without noticing that there's an axe right beside you.



    You acted as calm as you could, and stood up.





    You threw the papers at your wife and quickly ran out of the room.



    "JAAAAAKE!"


    You keep running and don't want to look at what there should be at your back.



    Suddenly, you found an elevator, you pressed the button, and waited for the elevator's arriving.



    When you noticed your ugly wife had crawled her way here already, the elevator had arrived.



    You quickly ran in the elevator, but your wife was trying to jump in the elevator, too.



    "TAKE A SHOWER WITH ME, JAAAKE."

    Your horrible looking wife jumped.


    But the elevator's door closed faster than her.

    You thought it was all over.







    What should Jake do now?

    Edited:

    Yes, Underhell used FakeFactory's model for main characters, that's what you're asking.
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  13. Post #13
    Jaded
    Pyth's Avatar
    April 2010
    2,200 Posts
    Jake should lick her fingers.
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  14. Post #14
    OficerHonkHonk's Avatar
    September 2009
    1,634 Posts
    He should kick her in the hand

  15. Post #15
    Ask me about my Marvel/DC fetish
    AaronM202's Avatar
    May 2010
    17,994 Posts
    Watch as the elevator descends, cutting her arm off because she cant hold down a several ton mechanism.

  16. Post #16
    To the Ski's Avatar
    September 2008
    917 Posts
    thumb war
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  17. Post #17
    King Shit of Turd Mountain
    The Castro's Avatar
    July 2009
    8,914 Posts
    Take a shit in Gman.

  18. Post #18
    This is a bad ripoff of Silent Hill 2 isn't it?
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  19. Post #19
    The Jackel's Avatar
    May 2011
    943 Posts
    Watch as the elevator descends, cutting her arm off because she cant hold down a several ton mechanism.
    As the elevator is going downstairs, the hand of your wife goes to the top of the elevator.



    Her hand made the elevator got stuck and couldn't keep moving downstairs.




    Suddenly, the man with suitcase beside you gave you an axe.




    So, you picked up the axe, and walk in front of the filthy hand that's still stuck in the doors.



    When you were just about to cut your wife's hand,



    you noticed that it disappeared.



    And other people on this elevator suddenly were all killed.



    What should Jake do now?

  20. Post #20
    Omega's Avatar
    March 2011
    223 Posts
    Panic? You are stuck in an elevator with two dead guys and the murder weapon. The police will not like this.
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  21. Post #21
    King Shit of Turd Mountain
    The Castro's Avatar
    July 2009
    8,914 Posts
    Take a shit in dead Gman.
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  22. Post #22
    Mr.Orange's Avatar
    September 2010
    10 Posts
    Open Gman's suitcase

  23. Post #23
    Gold Member
    Chancebond's Avatar
    July 2011
    797 Posts
    Masturbate.

  24. Post #24
    Mr.Orange's Avatar
    September 2010
    10 Posts
    Open Gman's suitcase

  25. Post #25
    Jaded
    Pyth's Avatar
    April 2010
    2,200 Posts
    Close Gman's suitcase
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  26. Post #26
    ~blue 4evr~
    tehMuffinMan's Avatar
    October 2009
    10,782 Posts
    This is a bad ripoff of Silent Hill 2 isn't it?
    More of a ripoff of Underhell. Same protagonist name, same model, same model for the dead wife
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  27. Post #27
    Ask me about my Marvel/DC fetish
    AaronM202's Avatar
    May 2010
    17,994 Posts
    Use the door on the ceiling of the elevator to get into the elevator shaft, then climb the cabels to the rooftop, and jump and land perfectly on the first floor through the skylights.

  28. Post #28
    TheDeadBread's Avatar
    June 2011
    448 Posts
    Pry open the elevator door with the axe.

  29. Post #29
    Swatege's Avatar
    March 2011
    477 Posts
    Try to use elevator emergency exit to leave the building. (Elevator emergency exit is on the top of the elevator.)

  30. Post #30
    The Jackel's Avatar
    May 2011
    943 Posts
    Try to use elevator emergency exit to leave the building. (Elevator emergency exit is on the top of the elevator.)


    You tried to exit the elevator with emergency exit, but you got a problem.



    So you tried to open the elevator door with the axe.



    You opened the door,



    You realized that people on this floor seemed to be still alive.


    But you found out that there's a cop there, if he saw the corpses in the elevator, you're dead.

    You tried to get out of his sight, but the axe on your hands just made you so distractive.

    Finally, the cop saw you,



    "Hey, you over there. Freeze! "



    "F*ck. "

    What should Jake do now?

    Edited:

    More of a ripoff of Underhell. Same protagonist name, same model, same model for the dead wife
    Yeah, Underhell used FakeFactory's models for main characters, they just retextured the models.
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  31. Post #31
    Mr.Shpigun's Avatar
    November 2009
    644 Posts
    Tell him that you are Thane.
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  32. Post #32
    Swatege's Avatar
    March 2011
    477 Posts
    You should throw axe to cop face.

  33. Post #33
    Gold Member
    Blooper Reel's Avatar
    February 2011
    5,450 Posts
    Smooth talk your way out.

  34. Post #34
    The Jackel's Avatar
    May 2011
    943 Posts
    Smooth talk your way out.
    So, you walked in front of the police.

    "What's with the blood the elevator and axe? "



    You tried to smooth talk your way out, at least, you tried.


    "Uhh, it's my wife! She is trying to kill me. You know what it's like, right? " ,You said.




    The Police looked at his feet,





    With a big laugher,



    "Of course I understand!" , the cop said.








    What should Jake do now?
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  35. Post #35
    Mr.Shpigun's Avatar
    November 2009
    644 Posts
    The fuck just happened?
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  36. Post #36
    JPsRcE's Avatar
    August 2010
    1,235 Posts
    Where in the fuck does this guy keep getting those axes? Seriously, have the cop shoot him, right through the fucking head FINISH HIM!! And this story.

  37. Post #37
    Gold Member
    elowin's Avatar
    December 2009
    7,794 Posts
    Where in the fuck does this guy keep getting those axes? Seriously, have the cop shoot him, right through the fucking head FINISH HIM!! And this story.
    Yes.
    Do it.

    Like, right now.

  38. Post #38
    :3 FURRY ELITIST PRIDE :3
    Jacknife's Avatar
    January 2011
    6,579 Posts
    jake should run in front of a car

  39. Post #39
    Skerion's Avatar
    November 2010
    2,863 Posts
    Go home and lose the Fakefactory costume and change into your original citizen model because with the current one you're wearing, you're going to look awfully suspicious and people are going to think you're some kind of pedo.

  40. Post #40
    Ask me about my Marvel/DC fetish
    AaronM202's Avatar
    May 2010
    17,994 Posts
    Stop using that damn filter.
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