[The Combine]

This time less monocolor!
Point out dem flaws please :buddy:

[Haxxer]

I'd say the hunter has too much blur on him. Had trouble spotting him against the dark background.

[The Combine]

Made him brighter.
Anything else?

[Slithersoul]

At first I was like "What hunter?" but then I saw him.

[LieutenantLeo]

Good, but still i can't really see the hunter.

[Slithersoul]

He still looks like a part of the background imo

[gtanoofa]

Zoey would never say wuss. Also her expression is ambitious instead of angry and she is holding the handle wrong.

[The Combine]

Yeah, I seemed to fuck up the lighting on the hunter.
Oh well, try harder next time.

[FrEeKy ThInG]

dude
you overblur stuff still.
stop it :(

[Rastifan]

A woman who looks happy with a chainsaw in her hands are to be fucked with. This I firmly believe.

Nice job despite to much blur. Light is awesome as always. Also very good posing.

[GoldenBullet]

FrEeKy ThInG posted:

dude
you overblur stuff still.
stop it :(

dude
you have shit replies still.
stop it :(

[Ehanced_AI]

Much much better color wise.

[GoldenGnome]

Zoey is wearing a sweatshirt.

[Joazzz]

Rastifan posted:

A woman who looks happy with a chainsaw in her hands is to be fucked.

:madmax:

[The Combine]

Ehanced_AI posted:

Much much better color wise.

Thanks!

[Henry Townshend]

The way Zoey is holding the chainsaw looks very awkward and unnatural.

[The_J_Hat]

That Hunter be fucked.

Edited:

The only flaw is that the Hunter is too blurry, but I can see what you were going for.

[R M S 1 3]

faceposing needs work. more eyebrows and overall more exaggeration. She doesn't seem to have that intense look in her eyes

[The Combine]

Heh, still getting the hang out of this.
Thanks for all your comments! :buddy:

[Rastifan]

Joazzz posted:

:madmax:

Alright. Not until she at least have put down the chain saw.

[Klammyxxl]

gtanoofa posted:

Zoey would never say wuss. Also her expression is ambitious instead of angry and she is holding the handle wrong.

Because Zoey never was, and never will be ambitious.

[ChestyMcGee]

I call it a "hoody".