[Advisor]

What the title says. Takes place during seven hour war.

[Stopper]

Where should I start. Ok. Muzzleflash looks like a flamethrower, fire is too bright but yet doesn't give out a glow or shadow, posing is plain wrong on the guy on the left and stiff on the guy on the right (flamethrower guy) and the explosion looks quite bad. The smoke is nice though.

[hypnotoad]

everything stopper said, posing is horrible

[69105]

this is how ddok needs to color

Edited:

i wonder where he went! probably got grounded again for forgetting his abacus

[rossmum]

i beg to differ. the colour is sloppy, it's almost all yellow, and the background is totally desaturated. it looks like he just took to the picture with a random soft-edge brush and the layer set to overlay and went wild.

posing is awful, distant explosion is awful, noise is awful, smoke needs serious work. what i will commend you on is your choice of a backdrop and the fact you didn't add in overwatch troops or some bastardised form thereof. the fire in the immediate foreground (right corner) also looks good, but there's some kind of yellow scribble visible over the top of it.

[yujin110]

No finger posing on the guy reloading. You might wanna move there head alittle down so it looks like they are aiming down there iron sights as well as shift there body abit side ways like this guy.

[69105]

rossmum posted:

i beg to differ. the colour is sloppy, it's almost all yellow, and the background is totally desaturated. it looks like he just took to the picture with a random soft-edge brush and the layer set to overlay and went wild.

oh no don't get me wrong it's still horrendous

however this man deserves compliments because it's still vastly superior to the so-called circle jerking screenshot god eleven year olds

*rubs dicks with facepunch.com*