[FrEeKy ThInG]

Posing by angry baby.

Another take on this epic picture.

Tried snow.
Improved explosion.
iunno..

[Zeraxify]

there was no need for a new thread, you could've just updated/bumped the old one.

but while we're here, the snow looks good but lacks depth/depth of field. fire could also use some improvement, i think it's too solid and smudged.

[cheesecurls]

that explosion needs alot of work

[Joazzz]

And so does the muzzleflash. Everything looks rushed.

Well, the snow is kinda nice.

[FrEeKy ThInG]

Zeraxify posted:

there was no need for a new thread, you could've just updated/bumped the old one.

but while we're here, the snow looks good but lacks depth/depth of field. fire could also use some improvement, i think it's too solid and smudged.

Explosion not fire :3

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Joazzz posted:

And so does the muzzleflash. Everything looks rushed.

Well, the snow is kinda nice.

It wasn't rushed actually ;P

[Zeraxify]

dun correct me :(

[haushippo]

FrEeKy ThInG posted:

It wasn't rushed actually ;P

if that's true that just further proves how terrible you are.

[FrEeKy ThInG]

Zeraxify posted:

dun correct me :(

sry. :3

haushippo posted:

if that's true that just further proves how terrible you are.

well aren't you just adorable.

[CptLemons]

Why would there be an explosion anyways? The Dreadnought has the gun on one arm and a flame thrower on the other.

[FrEeKy ThInG]

CptLemons posted:

Why would there be an explosion anyways? The Dreadnought has the gun on one arm and a flame thrower on the other.

Grenades?

[ttam6297]

I am with you Freeky, I suck ass at explosions and no one cares to give you decent instruction when it comes to actually help making one. Thats cause its probably more harder then we think, or so obvious we look retarded lol.

I've been searching for a decent tutorial for explosion for about a month, haven't found one worth my time.
If I find one, I will keep you updated.

[FrEeKy ThInG]

ttam6297 posted:

I am with you Freeky, I suck ass at explosions and no one cares to give you decent instruction when it comes to actually help making one. Thats cause its probably more harder then we think, or so obvious we look retarded lol.

I've been searching for a decent tutorial for explosion for about a month, haven't found one worth my time.
If I find one, I will keep you updated.

Well thank you.
I will do the same. :3

[necrobard]

Muzzle flash should be a lot bigger, dreadnought assault cannon is like 250 cal or something ridiculous like that.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UID6LEzvRRo

That was the Opening video for dow1 and the credit video for the dow1 expansions, good shots of the dreadnought assault cannon, the muzzle flash is slightly bigger then the rotating barrel set.

Also I though the fire was good at first except that It's supposed to be an explosion? I thought it was a good flame burst cause thats the dreadnought's flamer arm.

Snow is nice though.