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Very cool idea, editing could use some work though.
you keep making those muzzle flashes too small
Wait, there's a muzzleflash at the EDGE of the barrel, but not inside it?
The flash is also too small.
I like smaller muzzleflashes :C
If anything, the muzzle looks more like a flash hider than anything else (going from my limited knowledge), so there wouldn't even be a muzzle flash, just smoke escaping.
Make the flash microscopic and add smoke around the barrel. That works. What Pancake said.
Give me the original if you still have it.
LOL I laughed. I read only Are you blind. Then I saw Can't you see I'm infected? Nice job.
The pose itself isn't really all that interesting, but I certainly like the filtering. The posing is overall pretty solid too, but the EOD guy from KF I forget the name of looks like he's doing a pelvic thrust, and that combine soldier could have his legs spreaded out abit more and with less knee bending, especially the front. It looks like his body is leaning forward and his legs aren't stabilizing him at all.
The effects, simply put, are unimpressive and horribly under-exaggerated. The muzzle flash if it was being disrupted by the flash hider, would appear more dispersed and mixed in with smoke, and ofcourse actually be coming from the barrel, instead of the tip of it.
Other then that, it's all fine. I'd say the map looks empty and bland, but it is quite a small scene.
pro tip from frequent (military and otherwise) shooter!
the flash elim doesn't remove the flash, it redirects it so as to blind you slightly less if you fire in the dark. firing with or without a flash elim will produce more or less the same result; a puff of smoke most of the time and the odd vaguely-visible fireball. at night or in wet weather, though, said fireball can be anything from visible enough to a 3' monster.
Hahaha! The funny thing is, he IS blind! Look at his helmet, it's completely covering the tiny gasmask eyeholes.
All these broken wrists lately... :smith:
:smithicide:
Broken wrist, whar?
The editing itself is decent but the pose is pretty boring
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(User was banned for this post ("This is not constructive criticism. Where are your tips, where is the advice?" - verynicelady))
Once again, Good C&C that's very valid and true but you still come off as a massive prick.
He is good at spotting errors. But yes, it is douchebaggery since no one ordered any dissecting of their pictures.
It's good C&C IMO, but the way he words it makes him, as halflambada said, he comes off as a massive prick.
The picture labeling is VERY useful though.
Shitty dodging?
If this d-bag ever posts a picture I am going to rip it to fucking shreds, I bet he can't even pose.
Ripping pictures down like this is just obscene and makes you look more retarded then the person that messed up.
Thanks man :D
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I can still pose better than you. :3
What's the matter, bud? Can't handle it in THE OWNZONE?
http://steamcommunity.com/groups/OWNZONEOWNZONEOWNZO
Yeah i'm just gonna pose and edit something for you to waste your time on. :)
the muzzleflash looks fine.
Oh god dammit, YOU'RE BACK!?
why the fuck didn't greasemonkey just perma you!?
I agree :C
Because im just too damned loveable.
You obviously haven't seen his stuff.
Post some of it pl0x.
http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=971995
It's good C&C, but yeah muzzleflash is too small IMO.
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http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=970919
http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=926556
So he basically shits out a bunch of ingame effects and it looks good?
I dislike those pictures.
So they're bad because they're not edited? Even with just in-game effects, they still look better than most stuff posted here.
Probably.
I wish that infected guy getting shot was Kurit, but then again it would look bad to kill children.
No matter how good C&C it is and how good you are at posing yourself, you're an asshole.
Why such a dick, Dick.
It's a nice idea, I think the posing is nice, but there are a few inconsitiencies on the editing and the camera angle isn't that intresting.
It's nice, you just got to work on editing a bit.
Stop jumping in to the bandwagon.