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    March 2006
    94 Posts
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  2. Post #2
    Fabulous Vailglorous Extraordinaire
    Haxxer's Avatar
    February 2007
    10,709 Posts
    You really need to work on your posing before even opening GIMP, photoshop or whatever. If you edit before getting the basics down you'll just be polishing a pile of shit. Sure, it might look fancy, but it's still a piece of shit.

    The muzzleflashes are really too yellow, the posing is downright horrible and it lacks any interesting lighting.
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  3. Post #3
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    Zupinata's Avatar
    May 2006
    923 Posts
    The guy running is too stiff and shooting with 1 hand? (horrible accuracy), dead guy seems like you flipped him there,why are you using suppressors on a mech?, The guy in-front elbow is way too bent,

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    Leon's Avatar
    June 2005
    4,403 Posts
    The effects lack depth, and you gotta STOP DROP AND http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=203222