1. Post #1
    ~Tokyopop!~'s Avatar
    July 2010
    11 Posts
    Hello friend!~ This is my manga i make for you to enjoy! thankyou!






















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  2. Post #2
    LockPod's Avatar
    July 2010
    68 Posts
    Ooooooookay, that was weird.

  3. Post #3
    BigNig666's Avatar
    July 2010
    10 Posts
    A++ comic, would read again.

    Very artistic, dramatic, poetic, beautiful. The illustrations were just immaculate and the dialogue very engrossing.
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  4. Post #4
    Huge Faggot #2
    GoldenGnome's Avatar
    November 2007
    5,149 Posts
    Ughh.

  5. Post #5
    ~Tokyopop!~'s Avatar
    July 2010
    11 Posts
    A++ comic, would read again.

    Very artistic, dramatic, poetic, beautiful. The illustrations were just immaculate and the dialogue very engrossing.
    Thankyou! ^^



    I don't understand, i am not good at english o_0
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  6. Post #6
    i posted my dick on phw
    Takara's Avatar
    August 2006
    67 Posts
    i loved it, bravo very good yes

  7. Post #7
    Soderholm14's Avatar
    July 2010
    496 Posts

  8. Post #8
    MeLuckyCharms's Avatar
    May 2009
    85 Posts
    THE GRAPHICS!!! That is all.

  9. Post #9
    I through it was pretty good.

  10. Post #10
    Hax4's Avatar
    July 2007
    27 Posts
    really interesting story, a++ comic, would read again.

  11. Post #11
    Skeleton Porn-Star
    Devil Traitor's Avatar
    August 2009
    7,735 Posts
    Nice comic you did there, just turn up the graphic and make sure you check your spelling.

    Edited:

    Oh yeah, almost forgot, welcome to Facepunch, were people hate anime and Twilight.

  12. Post #12
    Gold Member
    RearAdmiral's Avatar
    May 2010
    6,186 Posts
    What program did you use to edit it? There have certainly been worse first attempts at making a comic, but here's some tips.

    Even if it kills your computer, turn your graphics up as high as you can. If your computer isn't up to much, then pose with graphics your computer is comfortable with, and then turn them up when you take the pictures.

    Fingerposing is a good idea if a character ever picks something up, like that pistol.

    There's probably some other stuff but that's all I can think of at the moment. The posing was OK and the writing was fairly good considering English isn't your first language.

  13. Post #13
    ~Tokyopop!~'s Avatar
    July 2010
    11 Posts
    Thank you for your encouragement!~ Sorry about the grafic quality, my lap computer is not so good. I will make new comic soon!~ さようなら!!!

  14. Post #14
    Abused by Girlfriend
    geogzm's Avatar
    January 2010
    20,067 Posts
    Everybody in here's being sarcastic, it's fucking terrible.
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  15. Post #15
    Gold Member
    RearAdmiral's Avatar
    May 2010
    6,186 Posts
    Everybody in here's being sarcastic, it's fucking terrible.
    I'm not. :saddowns:

  16. Post #16
    LockPod's Avatar
    July 2010
    68 Posts
    Everybody in here's being sarcastic, it's fucking terrible.
    I'm not either!
    For some reason everytime I come here to check the new comments, I read the whole comic again, shit's addicting.

  17. Post #17
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    THE GRAPHICS!!! That is all.

  18. Post #18
    Gold Member
    bigbadbarron's Avatar
    February 2008
    1,662 Posts
    He is not bad with the concept but the implementation is lacking.























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  19. Post #19
    Gold Member
    RearAdmiral's Avatar
    May 2010
    6,186 Posts
    He is not bad with the concept but the implementation is lacking.

    -snip-
    Oh man, now I want to have a go at making one of these.
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  20. Post #20
    ~Tokyopop!~'s Avatar
    July 2010
    11 Posts
    He is not bad with the concept but the implementation is lacking.
    This is no good my friend, you made rid off all the emotion and ?mood?. Please do not copy my work, i put hard time and i do not want plagiarism.
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  21. Post #21
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    ZeekyPoe's Avatar
    May 2006
    1,213 Posts
    This is no good my friend, you made rid off all the emotion and ?mood?. Please do not copy my work, i put hard time and i do not want plagiarism.
    Ahahahahaha!
    AHAHAHAHAHA!
    AHAHAHAHAHAHA-!

    ...What you're serious? My god.
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  22. Post #22
    Kiss me, I'm Irish
    Fort83's Avatar
    September 2006
    9,176 Posts
    This is no good my friend, you made rid off all the emotion and ?mood?. Please do not copy my work, i put hard time and i do not want plagiarism.
    Bigbadbarrons version was better because it wasn't a troll comic and my eyes didn't hurt when looking at it
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  23. Post #23
    King Shit of Turd Mountain
    The Castro's Avatar
    July 2009
    9,061 Posts
    This is no good my friend, you made rid off all the emotion and ?mood?. Please do not copy my work, i put hard time and i do not want plagiarism.
    Of course the emotion would be lacking because you're mad and you read it without any emotion as you would with your own.
    I know this, because I just do.
    btw I read your posts in a robot voice.

  24. Post #24
    LockPod's Avatar
    July 2010
    68 Posts
    Bigbadbarrons version was better because it wasn't a troll comic and my eyes didn't hurt when looking at it
    I think Original poster is trying to do a serious comic, but her lack of English language knowledge makes it look like a troll comic.
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  25. Post #25
    Kiss me, I'm Irish
    Fort83's Avatar
    September 2006
    9,176 Posts
    And lack of good graphics

  26. Post #26
    ~Tokyopop!~'s Avatar
    July 2010
    11 Posts
    Sorry my lap computer is not the best o_o, my brother bought this game one month this year so i am new this game.

  27. Post #27
    gtmod's Avatar
    June 2008
    39 Posts
    So low textures! so bad. :/

  28. Post #28
    thenecronlord's Avatar
    May 2009
    1,290 Posts
    oh yeah it looked SUPPR cold with paint spladhez every ware

  29. Post #29
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    You are so fucking depressive with your fucking comics always ending in suicide, sometimes badly posed and always about lonely. :wtc:


    But the grammar is much better then it is in the comic about america.

  30. Post #30
    JackDestiny's Avatar
    May 2007
    949 Posts
    love the grammar, I think that's the best part of you comics
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