[The Combine]

C&C please. IMO one of my best pictures yet.

[Kushie]

Her left arm looks kind of awkward. Like, it's not in a believable position for holding the weight of the rifle like that. And the flashlight beam cone looks odd, like not perfectly angled, but that doesn't really matter too much. I think Zoey could use more facial expression. Looks like default mouth positioning. The rain looks awesome.

[Faraon_ZzZ]

I don't like her left hand and the rain.

[The Combine]

Oh, alright. Thanks for commenting!

[Vinze]

That looks more like a rifle than a person...

[Rastifan]

The arm is cocked to much, but the rain and light is awesome.

[DEMONSKUL]

i think she's holding the gun too high
the way she holds it,the recoil will make her fall flat on her nice ass

[Tampio]

Kushie posted:

Her left arm looks kind of awkward. Like, it's not in a believable position for holding the weight of the rifle like that.

Say that to my Sister.

[The Combine]

Thanks for commenting. :buddy:
Trying to learn how to pose ragdolls with weapons.

[Tomo Takino]

DEMONSKUL posted:

i think she's holding the gun too high
the way she holds it,the recoil will make her fall flat on her nice ass

Funny how i was thinking the same thing, minus wholse description of the gun and how shes holding it.

Ahem.

Anyway, i like the rain. Looks pretty good, but yeh, the left arm looks a bit odd, but thats about all. Oh yeh, and the faceposing.

Maybe trying giving her a smirk or something, makes it seem as if she has got something in her sights and is about to shoot it.

[ChestyMcGee]

As an extra point on what I put on DA, the glow from the torch is really low-detail and out of perspective.

[JurajIsNotPirat]

Monocolor-ish.

Where is your great lighting?

[Callitenvy]

Just make her slouch so you won't have to put the gun too high. It's good but it doesn't make sense why she would be taking her sweet time in the street aiming like that.