This trailer, though fast paced seemed very disorganized. Aside from some of the decent visuals, it hasn't a lot going for it plot wise. Artistic wise, it looks alright. If I were you, I would avoid the use of cheezey movie clichés, more than half of your scenes contained one. In some of your scenes you over-did the effects and in some cases you discarded the opportunity to put effects in.
Your first "car explosion scene" looked great, then as the video went on, my hopes dwindled. The part with the helicopter was without any obvious purpose, it was just there... The part at :20 had too many ships just sitting out there, and what was with the guy at :28, Is he the action hero or what? I find myself asking, what's going on???
Aside from some of the pointless visuals, some of them were pretty good. Point :16 spaceship scene and :18 car scene looked very nice, great use of blur and camera shake. 3/5 for great visuals and disorganization, it was okay.
I don't think you've ever watched a teaser trailer in your life.
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