[Lebowski]

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[Fussy!]

The pose is does not really seem advert-ish. More suggestive and maybe she should be smiling?
Otherwise, it's good yet alittle empty.

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

More awesome stuff. Loving the corporation names.

[Rastifan]

Fussy! posted:

The pose is does not really seem advert-ish. More suggestive and maybe she should be smiling?
Otherwise, it's good yet alittle empty.

Do you find anything more suggestive than chicks in advertising If they aren't half naked already, they make you wish they where.

Picture should be more flamboyant I feel. It is not bragging enough like advertising should do.

[Lebowski]

I would have used Elexis but there was an issue with her textures.

Also, with crab hands like she has, pulling off flamboyant is pretty hard.

[Rastifan]

Lebowski posted:

I would have used Elexis but there was an issue with her textures.

Also, with crab hands like she has, pulling off flamboyant is pretty hard.

Jessica was the right choice here. I mean like more colorful logos and/or some effects to fill out the screen.

[wraithcat]

The picture should grab the same treatment as the Unatco one. Better fonts and a logo.