1. Post #1
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Hello there. I liked the idea of making interactive things after browsing this forum a little. But (how come?) it seems like there are no serious interactives! I would like to make a serious interactive with good posing and editing. I am new to both, so don't take it very hard.

    On an other side, i am good at writing.

    Finally, urban zone. The city appeared so sharply, so it shocked the wastelander a bit. The wall, which was protecting the city from deserts untill it died, approached destroyed and broken in many places so it was easy to get in the city. Nobody needs to protect this place, because no one goes here by his own wish... Legends and mythics of the wasteland didn't touch Ryhan's soul or mind. He has a target, the most important target in his life. All the want, all he need - find Kreetele. Thinking about it, Ryhan looked around, then whispered the words of a song he heared in the bar few weeks ago.
    - Whatever blocks the way, whatever people say - walk you way. Never stop, don't surrender. There is no hope for a dreamer... ,- The echo was singing with the man. -
    Your choice may not be right,
    It may kill you,
    But you will fight,
    Because this choice is made by you.

    You will die for your dreams,
    And falling on the ground,
    You will be still fighting,
    And never closing your eyes,
    You will look around...
    Looking for the way...


    After going through the wall inside the city, Ryhan noticed this warehouse, which has an way to another area. After walking in the desert, Ryhan spent much supplies. Three litres of water, seven daily rations, a flashlight, a small kitchen knife - not much. But still, he has around seven days while he can scavenge around. Search this place or proceed outside?

  2. Post #2
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Search the cabinet and take the lantern.

  3. Post #3
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    A working gas lamp attracted Ryhan's attention. It was almost the only source of light in the warehouse, and it was working which means thats people left this place not so much time ago. The other fact, that people left a working gas lamp, which is expensive, means people left this place very fast. Campfire place is still warm. Wondering why did strangers make a campfire inside the warehouse and where did the smooke go, Ryhan stepped closer to the campfire place and searched all the things around. The cabinet was empty, but there was a note on it.





    Unfortunately, this note was just an old advertisment. These papers can be found in any city, town or a village, which were built much time ago. Leaving the note on the floor, Ryhan took the gaslamp in his hands to use it as a flashlight, because his own one has low battery.

  4. Post #4
    Gold Member
    ZombieWaffle's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,858 Posts
    Search the small cabinets next to you.

  5. Post #5
    The TRUE Holly
    nutcake's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,984 Posts
    He already said its empty.
    Look if something is in the wheelbarrow to your right.

  6. Post #6
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Yeah, wheelbarrow and surrounding objects.

  7. Post #7
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Stepping to the wheelbarrel Ryhan fastly finds out that he made the right choice. In that small rusty thing he found a small radio, which didn't react at any actions because of low battery. The radio's frequency was set on 78.8. Also there were: a rusty srap metal spoon, a stange capsule, which may have nothing or something invisible like gas inside, a hammer, a small container with gas. Ryhan's attention was concentrated on the capsule - it looked too strange and technological. At least it was clear and made of shiny metal. It seemed to be in completely wrong place. Other objects around the wheelbarrel were just trash - plastic bottles, empty crates and cans. But these things weren't typical - they all looked like new.



  8. Post #8
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    ZombieWaffle's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,858 Posts
    Take the harpoon, hammer, radio and the capsule.

  9. Post #9
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Ryhan took all the stuff, holding the spoon in his hands because it is too big and also can be a good weapon. Now, feeling like everything is done, he goes to the exit. After Ryhan pressed the button the massive door slowly opened. A very picturesque view opene to him. It was the cemetry of the industry: parts of the fallen crane were blocking the street, old rusty cars looking almost destroyed were anywhere. Plus, increapsing the effect, skys seemed to burn. It is normal in the wasteland, but here it looked like a part of the scene always being here.




    Suddenly Ryhan noticed a strange creature near the closest truck. It looked like a man, but was standing in a strange position. The unknown creature seemed to hide and was looking around the truck. Ryhan didn't know what to do. This stranger had dirty and very bad clothes with some blood on it. Its' skin was really grey. Ryhan got his spoon ready.

  10. Post #10
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Wait, what? What just happened? He got a spoon, then tries to leave and then outta nowhere a psycho? Well, it IS apocalyptic.

  11. Post #11
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Reamde the previous post.

  12. Post #12
    XenonDice's Avatar
    November 2009
    75 Posts
    Is he holding the spoon or the harpoon?

  13. Post #13
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    As you can see in 7th post it is a kind of spear with a small hook... It work any ways.

  14. Post #14
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Also known as a harpoon.

    Well, kill the strange creature. It's survival of the fitest in an apocalypse. Odds are, this strange creature is a Stalker.

  15. Post #15
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Edit: I won't be active THREE DAYS because i am going to the cottage. Sorry.
    Before Ryhan did anything, the man (the creature was a strange man) was shot right in head. Then Ryhan noticed a well geared man with a pistol in the trenches.



  16. Post #16
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    ZombieWaffle's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,858 Posts
    Stab the well geared man in the face and take his pistol.

    Edited:

    Also, did you photoshop or is that a stock muzzleflash.

  17. Post #17
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Mmm...say "I come in peace" THEN stab him.

    Or just be nice, make a friend, and set off to conquer the world!!!

    Edited:

    Levitating box....

  18. Post #18
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Weapons are the most important stuff, if you came to a city full of canibals, or what that thing was... No, a good suit is more important, but that doesnt matter - Ryhan had neither. Looking at the man with the pistol, who maybe just saved his life, Ryhan was thinking how to attack this guy. He really wanted this pistol and he didn't want to think much. No matter who is that guy, no matter what he wants. Ryhan needs a weapon fast and he won't miss his chance. Slowly, keeping his hands up, Ryhan steeped to the stranger. The barrel of the pistol was looking right in his right eye.
    - I come in peace... ,- Ryhan said, trying to show like scared.
    The well geared guy lowered the pistol a little and wanted to say something, but that moment Ryhan put his hand on the pistol and turned it away, then tried to punch his oponent in face. Everything was going very well.


    But suddenly the man dodged Ryhan's fist and blocked his arm. Also he stopped holding the pistol, and when Ryhan tried to take the pistol and use it, the stranger extended his left hand, strongly hit Ryhan's hand and compressed his wrist. Ryhan wasn't ready for that and couldn't do anything. He felt like loosing controll over the situation.

    Then, man's right leg blocked Ryhan's left one. Ryhan was in a very bad position, he could fall at any time.

    Stranger pushed Ryhan's chest and pulled his right hand to the side, making Ryhan absolutely helpless.

    Man's face was cold. His eyes, his lips, his face with scars all over it were saying better then a thousand of words that he killed a lot of such kids. Ryhan was in panic, he couldn't do anything, all his improved reaction was useless, because his enemy had technics and years of experience. Sharply Ryhan understood that he has no chances.

    A strange noise appeared somewhere very far from the place of battle. That made the well geared man finish this fight fast. He pulled Ryhan down and extended his knee. Ryhan was hit right in the Solar Plexus.

    Ryhan knocked out and had strange dreams. This event won't affect his reputation along the people in good way...

    Feeling very bad Ryhan woke up and noticed two important things - 1 - he is alive, 2 - he can move and feels not very bad, but his chest is damaged.

    Then Ryhan heard some noise. When he looked forward fastly noticed two humans, if it is possible to call such creatures humans. Psychoes, canibals, crazy people - whatever the two were, Ryhan decided to run. Those creatures saved his life - the man was running from them and had no time to kill and loot Ryhan. It is also strange that Ryhan wasn't killed by his saviors...


    Ryhan reached the closest wall of the trench and climbed it. He needs to proceed thought the districts to reach a shelter.



    Edit: Sorry guys, experimenting with format here. Let's turn it in ak ind of game. I finished this fight because it is really in the wrong place. Let's start from small actions, really.

    The box is not levitating, there is some trash under it xD
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  19. Post #19
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Okay.....that was a lot to read......make it shorter next time.

    So now.....learn to parkour I guess.

  20. Post #20
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Hint: describe actions properly, more detailed.

    Let's decide where to go...



    It is better to do that fast, because those strange things won't wait

  21. Post #21
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    L.

  22. Post #22
    TO SOME- THING
    Steven :D's Avatar
    September 2009
    4,025 Posts
    I Say look in the area around you before going off to parkour

  23. Post #23
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    As Ryhan started running along the left way he noticed a big building with a wall around it and a roadway, blocked by a crane.



    It seems like a new hostile appeared! Proceed through the street or try to get over the wall?

  24. Post #24
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    Matt PL's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,462 Posts
    try to get through the wall
    and since the creatures didn't kill you before, maybe they are friendly to you

  25. Post #25
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
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    Ryhan steps closer to the wall and looks around, looking for a place to start climbing from.


  26. Post #26
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Towards the metal box thingy.

  27. Post #27
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    ZombieWaffle's Avatar
    July 2008
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    Vault over the sandbags.

  28. Post #28
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Some events will happen in the city and other territories over time. They will affect the situation and the story.
    This time at Technokratos secret gas gathering station.









    Ryhan hoped over the sandbags and climbed the metal box, then got over the wall and entered the building.



    Ryhan stepped inside the hall, which had some electric lamps inside, and looked around


    A big metal scary electric lock is noticed on the door, leading into the room behind the fence. Hm, what to do?

  29. Post #29
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    ZombieWaffle's Avatar
    July 2008
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    Go upstairs.

  30. Post #30
    TO SOME- THING
    Steven :D's Avatar
    September 2009
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    Go upstairs.

  31. Post #31
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Uppidy Stairs.

  32. Post #32
    Huge Faggot #2
    GoldenGnome's Avatar
    November 2007
    5,149 Posts
    Up the stairs is the only logical choice.

  33. Post #33
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Ryhan went up the stairs, leaving the room without tries to open it, and noticed a room. He opened the door and entered it. It seemed to have something missing in it. Oh yeah, the owner was missing. The place doesn't seem to be abadoned.



  34. Post #34
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    Go behind the wall and climb the ladder. It's hidden for a reason, right?

  35. Post #35
    Huge Faggot #2
    GoldenGnome's Avatar
    November 2007
    5,149 Posts
    Take that cleaver, you could use a weapon, and the pills, you might be able to barter them to someone you meet.

  36. Post #36
    No Intentions's Avatar
    June 2010
    170 Posts
    Check the cabinet, listen (or watch) to what is on those CD's, take the pills and save the, and take the cleaver and use it as a weapon.

  37. Post #37
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    And THEN go climb the ladder.

  38. Post #38
    A highly respected gentleman in Chernarus
    GhostG45's Avatar
    June 2010
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    I really don't care for your writing style, but it's always cool to see interactive stories.

  39. Post #39
    Euphe's Avatar
    June 2010
    2,293 Posts
    Ryhan picked up the cleaver, because it was sharp and big and could be used as a good weapon, the pack of pills without any signatures on it and examined CD's, which appeared to be broken and have cuts (made with the cleaver) in many places. Seems like they were used in an alternative way.

    Then, turning around, Ryhan noticed a hole in the wall and a ladder outside. He came closer and noticed some old and dry blood.

    The ladder itself was too far away and Ryhan couldn't reach it.

    Then Ryhan searched the closet , which was absolutely empty, and heared some noise down the stairs.. Yeah, he didn't lock the doors...

  40. Post #40
    IAmNow's Avatar
    January 2010
    1,153 Posts
    .....RRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPPP DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPPPPP PPPP.

    Take the CDs, because throwing stars are cool, and go up the stairs.

    Oh, and get the pills.