1. Post #1
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    He won't even have time to shit bricks.



    Original:

    http://www.1337upload.net/files/free...2night0011.jpg

    This was a scenebuild, of course.
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    Vantes14's Avatar
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    Well done but the rain effect is weird.
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    rabbid666's Avatar
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    His eyebrows looks a bit funny. Otherwise, it's cool!

  4. Post #4
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    Well done but the rain effect is weird.
    How "weird"?

  5. Post #5
    Dennab
    June 2009
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    reminds me of alan wake
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    reminds me of alan wake
    Because of the flashlight, or because of the T-Rex? :smug:

  7. Post #7
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    This is awesome. Jurassic Park is awesome. The editing looks awesome.

    Everything is awesome.
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    This is awesome. Jurassic Park is awesome. The editing looks awesome.

    Everything is awesome.
    Thank you. It's kinda flattering to hear that from you, as I've admired your edits myself.

  9. Post #9
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    I was expecting TF2, but this is a lot better.

    Looks awesome, I love the posing and the flashlight/headlights, the rain looks a bit strong tho, even if your idea was to make a picture where it was raining like hell, you should make the rain less pronounced so it doesn't look cluttered.

    The splashes look cool btw.
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    the rain looks a bit strong tho, even if your idea was to make a picture where it was raining like hell, you should make the rain less pronounced so it doesn't look cluttered.
    I actually lowered the opacity of the rain, you should have seen it before I did. Looked even worse.

    I tried making it even less opaque, but after that I could barely even see it, so I left it like this.

  11. Post #11
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    I like the water on the ground.

    And the rest.
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    Water on the floor reminded me of a T-1000

    Love the picture, everything about it is great.
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    I was nice to a hobo once and he bought me this title
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    Haha, I thought that was a tree at first, but then I hit the fullscreen button.
    The water and rain looks really nice but there's just something about his expression that doesn't fit for me.
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    there's just something about his expression that doesn't fit for me.
    Hmm, well, I think I overdid the faceposing then. As one wise guy said, the L4D models are easily over-faceposed. That's the only expression I could think of, though. I wanted him to look afraid, panicing.

  15. Post #15
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    Cool looking. As mentioned before, the rain looks odd. You could fix that by making many layers of rain and put some of them behind Ellis and the T-Rex, shrinking the layers more and more the farther back you go. You also could have lowered the opacity a bit more, and upped the opacity of the rain in the light. Also could have added some vignetting to the top of the picture. The lightbeam from the flashlight looks ace though.

    Oh, and Here yo go.
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  16. Post #16
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    A T-Rex who can tip toe into it's unsuspecting food?

    Nice work although rain looks funny. Light work is superb.

  17. Post #17
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    shrinking the layers more and more the farther back you go.
    So that is what I forgot to do.

    Oh. Thanks.

  18. Post #18
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    Where are those foliage props from?

  19. Post #19
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    Where are those foliage props from?
    The Crysis pack.

    http://www.filefront.com/14568399/cr...a-for-SGG.zip/

    Also, tried to fix the rain.

  20. Post #20
    Dennab
    June 2009
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    what the hell i thought that was a tree

  21. Post #21
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    what the hell i thought that was a tree
    The engineer thought the same :/ He will die thinking an Ent killed him.

  22. Post #22
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    Thank you.

    Well, you've captured the Jurassic Park feeling exceptionally well and you can never go wrong with Jurassic Park :)

  23. Post #23
    Srgt. Shotup's Avatar
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    That's pretty cool.

  24. Post #24
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    We're hit and going down hard...

  25. Post #25
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    Totally expecting something TF2 related. Pleasantly surprised!
    Rain could be better (more depth), but everything else is great. The lighting inparticular.

  26. Post #26
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    Totally expecting something TF2 related.
    I suck at making titles that would be both descriptive and catchy. :saddowns:

  27. Post #27
    JurajIsNotPirat's Avatar
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    The water reflection is kinda aliased. The lighting is neat, but the rain is a bit too dense.

  28. Post #28
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    Still too dense? Oh come on, if I lower the opacity any more, the pic will lose the "one hell of a downpour" feeling.

    I could blur the 'water', though.

  29. Post #29
    What's brevity?
    ironman17's Avatar
    June 2006
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    Jurassic Park, I presume.

  30. Post #30
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    I honestly dont see the problem with the rain.
    I really like this picture.

  31. Post #31
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    Try blurring the rain a little bit, so that it doesn't look so sharp.

  32. Post #32
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    Jurassic Park, I presume.
    Clever girl.

  33. Post #33
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    that great!
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  34. Post #34
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    Pretty nice. I like the reskin.

    I think the engineer has been working around loud machinery for too long though.

  35. Post #35
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    I think the engineer has been working around loud machinery for too long though.
    Although it is never shown in the films, I bet the Rex can be a sneaky bastard.

    Any crits on the other stuff?

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    JurajIsNotPirat's Avatar
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    Nice flashlight effect, by the way.

  37. Post #37
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    Nice flashlight effect, by the way.
    Thanks.

  38. Post #38
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    I love it.
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  39. Post #39
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    I wish I could do stuff half as good as this :(

  40. Post #40
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    Very nice but clipping of the Flashlight on the Engineer's Shoulder