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Post #41
Dont use NPCS
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Then why, for the sake of argument, is no no body asking: "what the fuck is he holding", "whats going on", or "where'd the ninja guy come from?"
these would be excepted as evidence of bad Quality.
and BTW, THE FUCKING PERSON WHO MADE THESE IS POINTING THIS OUT!!!
so unless you intend to use examples in your criticism, Please feel free to go to another thread and troll.
Edited:
didn't, I posed those.
Oh snap, 2nd page.
I must calibrate, NEW SCREEN SHOTS!
not PhotoShoped,
Left to right: Jack, Jay, Maria.
Shoped,
and a High quality one that crashed me after i took it,
Son 0f grim finally took off his shades to Shop these.
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We aren't using specific examples because the overall product is so bad that it would take hours to point out every single flaw. And if you saw the problems yourself then why didn't you fix them? You aren't helping your case.
We aren't trolling. In fact your comic is so terrible that it is closer to trolling than what we are saying.
And work on your spelling. Oh and you should probably calm down too.
Don't insult our intelligence. Those are obviously NPCs.
And don't flatter yourself either, you're only on two pages because your comic has a million different issues and people are trying to tell you about them.
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over kill, just pointing out that unless you say, "this is bad because of," or "this could be improved by," (i have seen this one, but just thought i'd mention it) then I will just consider it shit feedback and move on.
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I really like the new series. They have started using custom animations so theres some really good fight scenes now.
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^ It was good for a while, but I slowly lost interest in it, I sometimes backtrack and get back into it, maybe I'll try again. :buddy:
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All right fine you want feedback? How about this:
Posing is boring and just plain terrible in most parts.
Characters are unoriginal and borderline marysues.
You used NPCs
There is little editing aside from adding some crappy text in a boring font and the other editing you do have is terrible.
You didn't crop the images and they're all separate so it's less of a comic and more of a list of pictures.
Graphics suck.
Story is boring.
Colors are washed out.
Dialogue is unoriginal and obviously an attempt to cash in on RVB.
You use GM_Construct or some variation of it.
Your spelling and grammar are absolutely atrocious. Seriously, what are you? Five?
Cursing so often in your comic doesn't sound natural and it makes you look immature.
There are other issues but I've grown tired of picking apart your so called "comic."
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Okay I take back everything I said,RvB is fucking awesome again.
but this comic still sucks.
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Indeed.
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and that is what I fucking wanted, Thank you. that is fucking feedback. why didn't you do this before?
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Why don't you stop cursing like a ten year old trying to act tough?
Why did you make such a crappy comic?
Why don't you use capitalization?
Why do you get so angry?
There are a lot of questions that go unanswered.
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in the comic or when i post? doesn't matter, I live in a very "Irish" (yeah thats a good term for my family) and they curse every other word. so I have a little bit of a problem, but i don't really care.
I felt like it.
Son 0f Grim Shops, not me.
Nic-fit's.
the original script was 25 panels long and explained who the guy in the back is. if you like i can insert the unedited pics and dialog in underneath them.
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For the love of god, no.
You don't know when to stop, obviously. So instead I'm just going to walk away now and never look back. But I'm warning you, these shitty comics are just going to get you more of the same.
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no, no your not. you'll keep posting for no reason until I quiet.
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But your comics are still going to be crap.
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Good god, you don't learn, do you?
Dumb x 1
