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this is my first comic, so please try to offer "constructive" criticism.
this is only the cover but more will be coming soon, so sit tight.
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Hi. A few suggestions:
[LIST][*] Try not to use gm_construct. This is the standard map which is shipped with GMod and is mainly used for the sandbox gamemode. There are other maps which suit your storyline, for example, rp_c18_v1, rp_tb_city45_v02n, etc etc.[*] Try to use a spellchecker before you post text. Microsoft Word is quite good but there are websites as well, so have a look on Google.[/LIST]
Apart from that, your posing is fairly good considering it's your first comic, especially the masked man on the right, that posing is pretty nice.
If you're using paint, then don't, use http://www.gimp.org/ or Adobe Photoshop if you have it.
Good luck on the next comic, I'll be looking forward to it.
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not Gm construct, gm_pd_destruct, which is a mod of the original.
my PC is shit, have to use Gmod on lowest settings. :(
was rushed because i do most of this at work.
more will come so check back often.
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If your PC is shit to the point were you have to put it on the lowest settings then you shouldn't make comics.
Nothing will looking good. Ever.
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He's right. If your PC can't handle decent Source settings then stop now, sorry.
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way to crush my dreams. still doing this.
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Just buy a new PC...
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God this looks like a frekin' PS1 game.
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your spelling
:psyboom:
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Sorry but i have to agree with these guys.
Shit PC = no comic making ever, even if you do continue, you will see the same comments.
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you you hate it so much feel free to donate.
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I don't think it's that big an issue. Generally pictures can be cleaned up afterwards with an image manipulation program, it's just a better PC can help save a lot of time and effort later on.
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Some helpful criticism you guys are giving. >.>
Just pose and set up the scene on crappy settings then set it to max settings when you take the screenshot.
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Why would we donate for you to buy a new computer? Mow some lawns. Get a job. Work for it your self. People get flamed for asking "I want tf2 plox so gift meh it!" so why should we give you our money?
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I honestly want to know what place would hire you because from the looks of your absolutely atrocious spelling you have the intelligence of a five year old using a dictionary written by a two year old.
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Garbage truck
driver?worker? The guy who rides on the back and dumps the trash in.
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i have a job, unfortunately things like food, bills, and internet are more important to me than a new PC.
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Then we can't help, Sorry, New pc or no comic making.
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I think this is going to be the way to go.
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Dude you have no right to tell this guy if he can or can't make a comic. He has all the right in the world to make a comic with shitty graphics, terrible spelling, and boring characters.
It doesn't mean should but you of all people should be the last to tell him he can't make a damn comic.
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And on this note, I proudly present
a Son 0f Grim production, (have to mention him, he does all the Photoshop)
Who watches the watchers?
and thats it, tune in for more coming soon.
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If he wants to be respected on comic making, and get C&C without having people say "Get a new pc", then he needs either turn graphics up when take a picture, OR get a new pc.
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I do turn the graphics all the way up, to medium. which is what my PC can handle if nothing moves. then I Photoshop the rest with the help of Son 0f Grim, who's a buddy of mine.
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Then you should have said THAT.
You shouldn't have said he isn't allowed to make a comic at all.
You REALLY should work on getting a new computer, your editing skills, and ideas before making a comic. I may have defended you but that doesn't mean I think you should keep going. To be honest this comic needs a crap load of improvement.
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read the newest one yet?
by the way the first panel is the raw unedited cut of the image before Son 0f Grim Photoshops it.
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Medium settings? It still looks low to me, and i meant over that it can handle.
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comment on the comic, not the image quality. I hate the low quality, if you hate it so much; PM me and you can be my camera man and take photos for me, then Email them to Son 0f Grim so he can Shop them and then I'll post them.
I'll happily hire a Camera man with a better PC then me to take photos in High-def.
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So then you wont be doing any work?
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Read harder, good sir. He wants a guy to take the shot for him after he's done with the posing and stuff.So then you wont be doing any work?
I don't know if I should help you; The comic doesn't look good right now, but it could just be the graphics.
Also, the editing isn't really sharp. The only thing I can see him doing is covering the entire picture in white.
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Looks like the first episode of Red vs Blue. Where they go.
Guy 1 : Hey
Guy 2 : Yeah?
Guy 1 : You ever wonder why we're here?
Then Guy 2 breaks into a speech about wondering if there's a God. Looks very fimiliar actually.
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Durp, the whole FREELANCER thing in the title, user name, and player model didn't tip you off?
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How are we supposed to think about RvB when we read the title, and look at the "playermodel" ?
And why does this Grim fellow make the panels so bright?
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Yeah I'm siding with FT here. It sounds like you took the idea from RVB and when you were found out you tried to turn the table on the guy that pointed it out.
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RvB was cool until it got a story and a shit load of crossovers.
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Indeed.
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Moron (Son 0f Grim) thinks he looks cool wearing sunglasses constantly, my guess is he was on his laptop, outside, and forgot to take them off before he edited. i complained to him, but he was an ass and is being lazy so he refuses to reedit them.
Edit: my original player model, for any one who plays Gmod with me, was a black armored Spartan.
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Then practice editing your own work instead of letting a "moron" do it for you.
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No one here plays Gmod with you and a black spartan doesn't automatically mean RVB.
It's not like "OH, he uses a black spartan model for his player model! He must be using Red VS Blue as an inspiration for a comic!"
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has anybody even noticed the new comic, or whats happening in the background of it?
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Yeah we aren't retarded.
Well most of us aren't anyways.
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