[Vinze]

I tried to make the title sound like the way they talked back during the 40's. It's been a while since I mastered the basics of posing, and I've lost the hang of alot of it. So I am starting off basic with this generic, so it's not meant to be good, but atleast acceptable:



C&C, please.

[ChestyMcGee]

Camera angle is kinda crappy. Way too much wasted space with the bench in the foreground and too much wasted space on the left with the blank wall.

If you're going to shove something in the foreground for depth, don't make it so that half the picture is covered by it.

Edited:

More than half.

[ZombieWaffle]

Where'd you get the blood texture?

[Vinze]

ZombieWaffle posted:

Where'd you get the blood texture?

http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=38437

ChestyMcGee posted:

Camera angle is kinda crappy. Way too much wasted space with the bench in the foreground and too much wasted space on the left with the blank wall.

If you're going to shove something in the foreground for depth, don't make it so that half the picture is covered by it.

Edited:

More than half.

Okay, I'll keep that in mind.

[Leon]

Posings spot on.

andd what the eothrs said

[headshotter]

You should zoom in, hard to tell what's going on.

[Vinze]

I got the save, so, I'll remake it later, I'm glad that I've atleast gotten my posing back on track, thanks for the critisism, people.

[OficerHonkHonk]

blood on the guy on the far left is horrid, otherwise good

[benzinxrm]

Multi-Color blood?

[Vinze]

benzinxrm posted:

Multi-Color blood?

If you're optimistic enough...

[Jim_Riley]

Your posing is not entirely at loss but keep working on that. This picture does not really do your posing efforts justice mainly because, as previously mentioned, it's a weak angle.

Still, you went for the basics and you succeeded. Keep at it.