1. Post #1
    tactical bulgarian butt buster
    Camarilla's Avatar
    October 2009
    1,371 Posts
    This is my first scenebuild ever in a pose of mine and just a few notes, I missed some spots of grass and I forgot to change the gear on the soldiers, so they all have the same gear(:ohdear:).

    :cheers: to my brother for the wonderful edit! :love:








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  2. Post #2
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    November 2009
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    Who ever edited that failed hard. Epicly.

    (If you didn't know, I am her brother.)
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  3. Post #3
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    January 2005
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    I like it, I think it's pretty cool looking, I like little details like the radio and tents over there.

  4. Post #4
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
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    June 2009
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    You have to zoom the camera in, otherwise you end up with... well, this.

  5. Post #5
    tactical bulgarian butt buster
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    October 2009
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    You have to zoom the camera in, otherwise you end up with... well, this.
    I purposely made it wide so I can show the viewers the details of the scenebuild.

  6. Post #6
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
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    Then you should moving the camera backwards, or try stitching because when the camera gets horribly fisheyed like this it just looks awful.

  7. Post #7
    ttam6297's Avatar
    November 2009
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    You have to zoom the camera in, otherwise you end up with... well, this.
    Did someone not make a CC guide like 3 weeks ago?

  8. Post #8
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    November 2007
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    Posing and stuff is good, but the editing is kind of sucky ass.

  9. Post #9
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    September 2009
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    The background is kinda repetetive.
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    August 2005
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    looks like they are in someone's backyard

  11. Post #11
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    December 2008
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    Who ever edited that failed hard. Epicly.

    (If you didn't know, I am her brother.)
    Once again, you gotta make your fire bright. Have some white in the middle.

  12. Post #12
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    August 2009
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    Posing on the german who put a 88mm shell in the gun is bad but other then that nice job. Grass is a bit repetitive, nice soldier btw they look like Waffen SS in camo.

  13. Post #13
    ttam6297's Avatar
    November 2009
    1,219 Posts
    Once again, you gotta make your fire bright. Have some white in the middle.


    Thanks for the tips, I used the color selction in photoshop and filled it with white, it didn't turn out white, but thats cool.

    And for all the people bashing my shitty edit, its cool, I won't be affended by the CC until I get really good like Chesty or Vman, or even if I get good. >.>