[0v3rkill2]

Rebel:B-b-but we're not Combine!
Man: Neither are we.
Rebel: Why are you doing this?!?
Man: Your so called "Resistance" is a Joke. You believe that one man, this Gordon Freeman character, will save all humanity? Your "savior" is the reason this mess started.
Rebel: Who are you?
Man: Captain Adrian Shephard.
*BANG*

Quick 10 minute pose. Could use some editing and what not.

[F T]

Don't you mean Corporal?

[T_T crai2]

not anymore nigggaaaaaaa

[Haxxer]

Shep Hard is one hard motherfucker

[Zeraxify]

The story sucks, but it's a quite good picture.

[Talishmar]

I'd expect Shephard to suspect Gman is the brains behind the mess.

[Fire Kracker]

U mean commander

[Drsalvador]

Rex Lee is a hardass.

[The Castro]

The moment I read, "Shepard" it was a combination of...
YEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHH and
oh shit

[Lord of Ears]

nice posing

could use effects, but I like the story

[ChestyMcGee]

The writing of the story is terrible but the concept is actually really interesting. Quite an original idea.

[Drsalvador]

Shepard was a corporal. Not a captain.

[0v3rkill2]

F T posted:

Don't you mean Corporal?

Drsalvador posted:

Shepard was a corporal. Not a captain.

Perhaps he got promoted.

[Drsalvador]

0v3rkill2 posted:

Perhaps he got promoted.

Just admit it, you messed up.

[ChestyMcGee]

Drsalvador posted:

Just admit it, you messed up.

I really don't think it matters as it doesn't effect the quality of the picture or the backstory in any way.

[0v3rkill2]

Drsalvador posted:

Just admit it, you messed up.

I purposely put Captain because in my mind, he got promoted after the seven hour war.

[The Combine]

lol CoD Nerds.
Picture looks nice but it really needs DoF.

[ChestyMcGee]

The Combine posted:

lol CoD Nerds.

:raise:

[The Combine]

People not focusing on picture and rather discussing if shepard is a captain, corporal or whatever.

[ChestyMcGee]

Yeah, I just didn't see where CoD factored into that.

[kevinseven]

The Combine posted:

lol Op4 Nerds.
Picture looks nice but it really needs DoF.

Fixed?

[The Combine]

Isnt the name of the guy that betrays you in MW2 named Shepard or something?

[ChestyMcGee]

Yeah but Gordon Freeman and the Combine aren't in MW2 I don't think.

[Zeraxify]

Adrien Shephard is from Opposing Force, dingus! Haven't you played those games?

[The Combine]

ChestyMcGee posted:

Yeah but Gordon Freeman and the Combine aren't in MW2 I don't think.

I tought thats what they were discussing about?

[Nixux86]

The Combine posted:

Isnt the name of the guy that betrays you in MW2 named Shepard or something?

His name Shepherd

This however is Shephard from Opposing Force.

[0v3rkill2]

So, about my picture...

C&C?


Feel free to edit.

[Dylan Clayton]

How would he be promoted to Captain after being MIA for many years?

[Chonch]

"Shephard."

[hypnotoad]

Rebel, Man. Not quite creative. Lold at the dialogue. Good posing though. and some editing would have been great.

Edited:

Also, when you are having a dialogue, it could use some narration.

[Doc_Fisherman]

Not trying to be a smart-ass or anything but...
Adrian never knew about Freeman (Unless for employee of the year photo) yet also he never knew his mission, why? Because his commander told his crew in the V-22 that he'll tell them about the mission at the landing zone, but never make it there.
Adrian just do what he can to survive.

Than again others might told him after wards.

[Ekalektik_1]

Actually, Shephard does see Gordon at one point. He rushes in just as Freeman takes the teleporter to Xen. You can follow him, but you fail the mission if you do on the grounds of attempting to create a time paradox.

EDIT: I almost forgot. Unusually original concept you've got here, and it's quite good. For a quick pose, the quality is very nice.

[69105]

that dialogue is terrible and makes no sense whatsoever. it leads up to nothing and adrian shephard has no justified reason to shoot the rebel at all


what I get is this

"your resistance is a joke and therefore you must die"

that's a pretty dumb concept