1. Post #1
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
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    Eli: So we meet again, my 'mutual friend'
    G-man: Yes... You know why I am here. Shall we make it... short?
    Eli: I knew this day was coming sooner or later. I have one question, though.
    G-man: What is that?
    Eli: What are you?
    G-man: At the time, I cannot answer that question. Not even to a man... with your importance.
    Eli: Why?
    G-man: My employers have... strictly forbidden me to put our mission at risk...
    Eli: Well, I have my cup of tea. Cheers for old times?
    G-man: For... old times.


    Fun fact: This is a recreation of my first pose.
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  2. Post #2
    PROFESSIONAL DICK INSPECTOR
    cornbread's Avatar
    November 2008
    2,440 Posts
    You could possibly work on the blood a little bit but I like it man.

    Also, part of Eli's leg is clipping through the couch.

  3. Post #3
    Der Ubermensch's Avatar
    December 2009
    463 Posts
    Can't really make sense of the impact and such, but here's some C&C:

    Work on your blood, mate.
    Bullet impact & wound could do some work.

    Besides that, it's pretty good.

  4. Post #4
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
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    I am quite aware I can't do blood for shit. Any tips?

  5. Post #5
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    The Vman's Avatar
    December 2008
    8,241 Posts
    Blood should have been darkened up, and it's awkward for Gman to be shooting Eli in the cheek. In the forehead would have been more appropriate considering the dialogue. Cheek shots seem like the person wasn't aiming very well.

    The big thing that I noticed was that Gman's gun isn't lined up to where the bullet hit. Gotta be careful about that. Also, it seems like Gman could be standing up straighter, being the professional that he is.

  6. Post #6
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    raptorfromsweden's Avatar
    January 2009
    2,132 Posts
    haha Gman- Te and shine Mr Vance
    vance- eh do you have to shoot me when im drinking my te?

    good pic zerax :)

  7. Post #7
    JurajIsNotPirat's Avatar
    September 2009
    5,115 Posts
    The muzzleflash could do some more light, never make blood transparent with no shading, add some motion blur on it.
    Other than, pretty good work.

  8. Post #8
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    masterfgh's Avatar
    January 2007
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    Why the title? I was listening to Nerf herder (awesome band)

  9. Post #9
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    headshotter's Avatar
    November 2007
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    Master, for your information a colt doesn't shoot .50 cal. :D
    Nice posing and all, but the blood is bad, try to do like mastergfh... just with a bit of tweaking.
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  10. Post #10
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    playelite's Avatar
    April 2008
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    Good posing.
    Gun should be pointed at forehead though.

  11. Post #11
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    masterfgh's Avatar
    January 2007
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    Master, for your information a colt doesn't shoot .50 cal. :D
    It does! Look at the marking, noob!


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  12. Post #12
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    ChestyMcGee's Avatar
    August 2008
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    The posing on Gman is just... weird. The way he's firing the weapon makes him kinda look like he has absolutely no idea what he's doing, which doesn't really fit the character.

  13. Post #13
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    November 2008
    4,250 Posts
    Wow the posing is so unatural. They're both too casual. Gman pose is stiff and wierd and Eli has no emotion of pain what so ever.
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  14. Post #14
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    H3llfire741's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,303 Posts
    looks good, but not a fan of the muzzle