1. Post #1
    a wet towel's Avatar
    March 2008
    1,661 Posts
    Only my third edit, constructive criticism is welcome. I'm not completely happy with Gman's posing myself though. Also my first try at smoke.

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  2. Post #2
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    Punkrock77's Avatar
    December 2008
    2,239 Posts
    The posing looks stiff, and a bit off. I don't like the contrast much. Use Super DoF as opposed to blurring the entire picture. And why did you use a splatter for smoke? :raise:

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    Oh, and the cigarette glow is to bright and there's too much of it.

  3. Post #3
    voldemorten's Avatar
    July 2009
    275 Posts
    i like the original best

  4. Post #4
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    TippZ's Avatar
    August 2007
    29,329 Posts
    Need some better editing!

  5. Post #5
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    playelite's Avatar
    April 2008
    1,990 Posts
    The posing is awkward, but it is not terrible. If you fixed the posing it would look excellent.