Only my third edit, constructive criticism is welcome. I'm not completely happy with Gman's posing myself though. Also my first try at smoke.
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Only my third edit, constructive criticism is welcome. I'm not completely happy with Gman's posing myself though. Also my first try at smoke.
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The posing looks stiff, and a bit off. I don't like the contrast much. Use Super DoF as opposed to blurring the entire picture. And why did you use a splatter for smoke? :raise:
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Oh, and the cigarette glow is to bright and there's too much of it.
i like the original best
Need some better editing!
The posing is awkward, but it is not terrible. If you fixed the posing it would look excellent.