1. Post #1
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    Hunterdnrc's Avatar
    August 2008
    11,155 Posts
    You know where we are Jim? We're in the place where you took this...sweet, innocent little girl, and mutilated her. Oh, your innocent, aren't you? But I know what you really are. I know what you did to her. I found..took this photo from the family..Thought it would be appropriate. You know, I probably could've gotten paid, but watching you die is enough. So now we have the problem at hand..which blade to use, and what to cut. Should I cut of your dick? So you can't rape any one else? Or should I cut off your fingers, one by one, so you can't wrap them around anyone's throat like you did hers...she was defenseless..A little like you right now.. Her picture will be last thing you see... her helplessness...last thing you feel. Well, back on topic, sharp blade leaves fast cut and then comes the blood...but this...rusty metal, it wil slowly tear your skin, then muscles, and only then Jim, blood will rise...you will bleed slowly Jim, I am bored tonight.

    Thanks to Kari for a little help with the story :banjo:
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    BeAR!)'s Avatar
    August 2009
    2,109 Posts
    loosk good although i think it's too bright.

  3. Post #3
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    karimatrix's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,141 Posts
    SLightly bright, posing is good. Monologue is great.
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    Dennab
    July 2008
    2,507 Posts
    nice work
    were did you get those models?

  5. Post #5
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    Omolong's Avatar
    December 2007
    7,717 Posts
    No credit to mean and the numerous others who worked on the model?
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  6. Post #6
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    Hunterdnrc's Avatar
    August 2008
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    Kari didn't tell me who made it :<

  7. Post #7
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    raptorfromsweden's Avatar
    January 2009
    2,132 Posts
    Realease that Model IT LOOKS SO COOL!!

  8. Post #8
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    karimatrix's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,141 Posts
    No credit to mean and the numerous others who worked on the model?
    Kari didn't tell me who made it :<
    cuz it supposed to be said in ze release thread jizzus!
    everyone will get his banjo...i mean credit!

  9. Post #9
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    T_T crai2's Avatar
    August 2005
    1,564 Posts
    ugh that monologue is terrible

    sorry but it sounds like a 10 year old wrote it and the picture itself is empty and rather underwhelming, almost like all the rest of your pictures
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    Santz's Avatar
    June 2009
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    The picture looks fullbright, which makes it bland and boring.
    The monologue is not very convincing either.

    Posing is nice and the angle is not bad tho.
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    February 2009
    1,489 Posts
    He's going to kill Max of S2D? Well, mabey that's not Max but Max does use that guy to depict himself in a video of his.
    Anyways, It looks good, lighting has a great fluorescent look to it similiar to the movie Saw™. I have no complaints about it and I don't suggest you listen to these people. They probably can't do any better and they're just trying to find mistakes because they're pessimistic, and unproductive. The lighting is fine and it's completely your choice on how to make it look. It's like complaining about Tim Burton movies, saying they're too dark, it's the creators choice There is really no legit reason to even complain about it seeing as you can make out everything in the picture perfectly. That model is also awesome looking.

  12. Post #12
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    Hunterdnrc's Avatar
    August 2008
    11,155 Posts
    Actually Kari, Santz, and Crai are all better then me, but thank you :3:

  13. Post #13
    The Combine's Avatar
    July 2009
    9,915 Posts
    Knifes arent casting shadows and thats a bit odd.

  14. Post #14
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    headshotter's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,444 Posts
    I wouldn't like to be that dude... but god... WHY SO MUCH VIOLENCE?

  15. Post #15
    s.n.'s Avatar
    October 2009
    2,058 Posts
    Knifes arent casting shadows and thats a bit odd.
    the only shadow there is under the barrel in the back

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    Bubz's Avatar
    September 2009
    5,044 Posts
    Law Abiding Citizen much?

  17. Post #17
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    Dennab
    August 2009
    7,289 Posts
    A bit bright as stated, but I like it. Nice model.

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    s.n.'s Avatar
    October 2009
    2,058 Posts
    Law Abiding Citizen much?
    reminds me more of rorshachs flashback in watchmen mixed with that scene

  19. Post #19
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    Butthurter's Avatar
    August 2007
    10,281 Posts
    Why does he have a photo of a black man's family?

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    Oh, I see.

  20. Post #20
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    Reno360's Avatar
    November 2008
    5,502 Posts
    That mask is fucking terrifying without the hat.

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    Reminds me a bit of a black and white Carnage/Venom

  21. Post #21
    fegathon's Avatar
    March 2010
    208 Posts
    Pretty good, but why does he have to put the photo there? There's nice empty table in the background.

  22. Post #22
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    The_J_Hat's Avatar
    December 2008
    12,553 Posts
    Nice.

  23. Post #23
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    May 2009
    1,003 Posts
    Why do I have this feeling that the story is influenced by Watchmen..it might just be the mask (Even though it doesn't look like Rorschach) that makes me think that but...


  24. Post #24
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    H3llfire741's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,303 Posts
    knife on table looks like its floating

  25. Post #25
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    Dennab
    December 2007
    11,272 Posts
    In a way he reminds me of deadpool.

  26. Post #26
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    H3llfire741's Avatar
    November 2007
    2,303 Posts
    In a way he reminds me of deadpool.
    deadpool/ rorschach