[Imanoob]

I chose this map because of its grassy scenary but of couse people have different opinions,so tell me anything wrong about this screenshot and what i have improved.


Things i already know:
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Wierd Posing
Blur rape
Bad Map(Depends on people)


Oh yea there is a hidden gmod in the screeshot,have fun finding him :D.




Raw and unedited version


Edited Version

[The Combine]

Horrible Graphics

[Imanoob]

I know but dont just tell me the cons,at least tell any pros :/

[Rastifan]

Explosion isn't all bad. But the rest.

Wrong scenery. Flat and uninteresting. Plan those better.
Colors are bland and again, uninteresting. Play around in post processing in GMod. It will help you improve you work. Or use Gimp. It is free and a great tool for editing pictures http://www.gimp.org/

Vman and Chesty made two great tutorials for it. Look them up.
http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=723271
http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=863858

[The Combine]

Rastifan posted:

Explosion isn't all bad. But the rest.

Its an ingame explosion lol.

[Rastifan]

The Combine posted:

Its an ingame explosion lol.

Yes Comby, but I was being constructive in my criticism. I did see a very good in game explosion once. Edited I presumed. Also one of the explosion packs had some fairly nice ones as I recall.

[JurajIsNotPirat]

Bad Composition, low graphic settings, bad angle.

[Imanoob]

Thanks for those links Rasti,i'll see if i can improve

[The Vman]

Imanoob posted:

Oh yea there is a hidden gmod in the screeshot,have fun finding him :D.

But the whole picture is in Gmod :psyduck:

[SonicHitman]

What are soldiers doing battling helicopters near castles.