[Hunterdnrc]

[thefrog]

Fucking amazing, but blur on bullet exit blur looks a bit stressed, directionally.

[Reno360]

DAMN! I like the eyeposing, blood, and the tiny bits of glass from the shot.
Something bugs me about the texture of the gun though.

[ssa gib A]

The back of his head's blood is overlaying the back of his head. You keep doing this and it's starting to get irritating. Remove it so it looks like it's at an angle where his head is blocking the rest of the blood.

I like that glass shattering effect, though.

[Reno360]

ssa gib A posted:

The back of his head's blood is overlaying the back of his head. You keep doing this and it's starting to get irritating. Remove it so it looks like it's at an angle where his head is blocking the rest of the blood.

That's a good point but it seems to me like the bullet is entering on the right most side of his head.

[Bubz]

Which way did he get shot.

[ssa gib A]

Reno360 posted:

That's a good point but it seems to me like the bullet is entering on the right most side of his head.

It should still be behind his head.

Edited:

or actually removed completely, or toned down to a minimum. He probably got shot from the back from what I can tell, and the back of his head's blood splatter looks too big for a bullet entry from the back.

Edited:

also some clipping on his arm that goes into the flares, but that's not a big deal and not that noticeable.

[H3llfire741]

The glass shards look too sharpened, also some brain pieces or head explosion would be nice.
Nice posing and blood though.