1. Post #1
    coco911231's Avatar
    August 2009
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    sorry for the bad hand pose, im new to this.



    This is my first try at posing/using dof or dov or whatever you call it/editing

    C&C please, i know really like to know where to improve (besides the hand pose)
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  2. Post #2
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    It looks like he is raping the dead body, but Its nice for a first pose, but I think that combine is a necrophiliac
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  3. Post #3
    coco911231's Avatar
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    It looks like he is raping the dead body, but Its nice for a first pose, but I think that combine is a necrophiliac
    he is going to beat on the chest of his fallen partner in anger and exasperation

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    December 2008
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    :smith:
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  5. Post #5
    coco911231's Avatar
    August 2009
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    what do you mean?, bad posing or just the scene?
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    June 2009
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    I tought Combines were not human anymore therefor they didnt had any emotions... but is your pic.

    Needs more focus and better lights so we can tell whats going on.

  7. Post #7
    brubru10's Avatar
    January 2010
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    whats ups up with his hand its all bent
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  8. Post #8
    Ham_Wallet's Avatar
    August 2008
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    The posing is really odd, it is very hard to see what is even going on. Also use Super DOF not just regular DOF and make sure to hit "render" before taking the picture.

  9. Post #9
    brubru10's Avatar
    January 2010
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    oh its your first pose well then ill rate it 5/10

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    BeAR!)'s Avatar
    August 2009
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    weird posing

  11. Post #11
    coco911231's Avatar
    August 2009
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    The posing is really odd, it is very hard to see what is even going on. Also use Super DOF not just regular DOF and make sure to hit "render" before taking the picture.
    i did use super dof and i hit render, i didnt notice the hand pose till it was already here

  12. Post #12
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    UberGamer's Avatar
    December 2008
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    For a first, it's really nice.

    Work on the posing and camera angles in future, though.
    Good use of DOF, and good use of not using the HL2 blood.

    Rated artistic.
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  13. Post #13
    coco911231's Avatar
    August 2009
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    thank you!

    rated heart

    Edited:

    also if you notice, i tried    (and failed)    at texturing, look at the alive combine's vest and his pants leg

  14. Post #14
    Ham_Wallet's Avatar
    August 2008
    705 Posts
    Hmmm, it seems very radial for Super DoF. Well just keep at it and you will be doing works of art in no time.