[Joazzz]

A scenebuild kinda. GM_Construct.

[Punkrock77]

Nice build! Lightsaber effect is perfect, and the posing is great!

[VaSTinY]

Whats with all the SW poses lately?
Other than that it looks pretty awesome though.

Only thing bugging me is that he should be looking to his left instead.

[Santz]

You edited the whole face/scars right?

Looks pretty neat, but the BG is very plain.

[Joazzz]

VaSTinY posted:

Whats with all the SW poses lately?
Other than that it looks pretty awesome though.

Only thing bugging me is that he should be looking to his left instead.

I posed his eyes to look left first, but it looked a bit funny.

Santz posted:

You edited the whole face/scars right?

Yes.

Edited the eyes.

[VaSTinY]

That does look better in my opinion.

[Venus]

Great Scene build, great posing, good editing.

( Arty for ya )

[ChestyMcGee]

Good posing and depth-of-field. Lighting is nice too.

I'm not sure that this would have been better on a map of some sort because the scenebuild makes it look like a construction map. There seems to be a bit of dodgy isolation around the Jedi's hood.

[Joazzz]

ChestyMcGee posted:

I'm not sure that this would have been better on a map of some sort because the scenebuild makes it look like a construction map. There seems to be a bit of dodgy isolation around the Jedi's hood.

I thought of using a map until I realized that there weren't any maps that would have suited my pose.

[Santz]

Joazzz posted:

I thought of using a map until I realized that there weren't any maps that would have suited my pose.

Well, not trying to be picky but you should have added more stuff to the walls, they look damn plain.

And nice work on the face edit.

[desertsniper]

Lightsaber is rather skinny. Fatten the lightsaber, and i will be pleased.

I say this becuase your taking the picture from maybe a foot away.... And from what i can tell from the movies. Lightsabers are maybe 4-5 inches across.

[Joazzz]

desertsniper posted:

Lightsaber is rather skinny. Fatten the lightsaber, and i will be pleased.

I say this becuase your taking the picture from maybe a foot away.... And from what i can tell from the movies. Lightsabers are maybe 4-5 inches across.

Depends on the lighting. Let's take the first Luke vs Vader duel as an example. In the carbonite freezing chamber Vader's saber looks way more fat/wide than Luke's, and Luke's looks wider in the air echange chasm thingy. Of course this was because of the 80's effects, but still. And in the new movies and the movies in general, they look the wider the farther the camera is.

[Bubz]

I'd like it if it was darker.

[bodenlan2]

The lightsabur is nice.
The scar seriously looks terrible.