[OzJackal]

Original:
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8316/d1trainstation020002o.jpg
All C&C is appreciated.

Thanks guys. :)

[Santz]

Looks nice, altho I smell SHEFing :ninja:

[OzJackal]

Santz posted:

Looks nice, altho I smell SHEFing :ninja:

Yeah, I'm not really good at manual editing so I just have the SHEF do most of it for me.

Edit: Added an original picture for comparisons to the OP.

[ZombieWaffle]

He looks too stiff and tense to be relaxed.

[Santz]

Instead of SHEFing try doing actual shadows, it looks 300% better.
And to get you started have here a nice tutorial for shadowing and all sorts of stuff:

http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=863858

[The_J_Hat]

Nice.

[bodenlan2]

he is after all in c17 and combines would be all over his ass if he was just not doing shit

[Egg_Toaster]

I can see his boner.

[OzJackal]

Santz posted:

Instead of SHEFing try doing actual shadows, it looks 300% better.
And to get you started have here a nice tutorial for shadowing and all sorts of stuff:

http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=863858

Thanks for this, I'll use it for the other pictures.

[Reno360]

I like SHEFing...

His right hand seems a bit off to be in his pocket.

[OzJackal]

Reno360 posted:

I like SHEFing...

His right hand seems a bit off to be in his pocket.

I tried blurring his hand and fixing the seam but in the end it looked like his hand was mutated or sewn into the pants.

[HyoMonkys]

Is this a model from that crap Necro rp?

[OzJackal]

HyoMonkys posted:

Is this a model from that crap Necro rp?

I'll find the link for you.

http://www.facepunch.com/showthread....hlight=citizen

[NateLB]

Very boring... but it looks alright if that counts for anything.