1. Post #1
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    This is a music video I produced within one week as my winter project, I am very satisfied with the results and I hope you will enjoy viewing it too.
    The idea of this music is mostly based on my own thoughts and emotions while listening to the song, I hope you will feel the same emotions when watching this video.

    Artist: Linkin' Park
    Song: My December

    If you would like to know the story, please read the description on the webpage. (click more info)


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  2. Post #2
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    I would like to hear everyone's views please.

  3. Post #3
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    Why is no one replying? is there something wrong with my video?

  4. Post #4
    The Cold Wind Of France
    Dennab
    November 2008
    18,680 Posts
    is there something wrong with my video?
    Linkin' Park
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  5. Post #5
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    Linkin' Park
    how is this a problem? because its overused? but no one has ever made a music video with this song though.

    please explain I don't understand.

    Edited:

    I'm sorry but are you saying this just because im new to the video section? do you not give chances to new comers?
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  6. Post #6
    DoubleHawkFilms's Avatar
    December 2009
    117 Posts
    It was cool, but Linkin Park are shit. Next time choose a really bad ass song.

    Add more drama into it, it was basically someone walking with the same person talking with a nice effect put on the right/left hand side.
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  7. Post #7
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    So you thought like that, ok. You obviously didn't feel any emotion.

    how is there suppose to be more 'drama' to a calm song like this and also Linkin' Park aren't crap, their lyrics to all the songs have a meaning, their music sounds great too.

    this was suppose to be a calm music video not a bad ass machinima...

  8. Post #8
    Flying Donkey's Avatar
    January 2010
    274 Posts
    It had some good parts as well as some bad parts!
    I don't like Linkin Park but i don't think they killed off any quality of the video.

    I liked the enviroments and looks but the part when the main character shot the murderer ruined alot! you simply don't go pretty birdie and fly away from a gun shot like that!
    His facial expressions also where quite stale i'm affraid! try doing some faceposing to give the video more emotions!

    you get two awesome out of five!
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  9. Post #9
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    September 2008
    4,428 Posts
    Nice video, I disagree with the other people the song gave it a kind of dark mood, and its much better than anything I could do. Good job
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  10. Post #10
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    It had some good parts as well as some bad parts!
    I don't like Linkin Park but i don't think they killed off any quality of the video.

    I liked the enviroments and looks but the part when the main character shot the murderer ruined alot! you simply don't go pretty birdie and fly away from a gun shot like that!
    His facial expressions also where quite stale i'm affraid! try doing some faceposing to give the video more emotions!

    you get two awesome out of five!
    thanks, finally some constructive criticism!

    Yea, I'm still novice at faceposer need to learn more on it. and what do you mean about the gunshot part? the event was too fast?

  11. Post #11
    Flying Donkey's Avatar
    January 2010
    274 Posts
    thanks, finally some constructive criticism!

    Yea, I'm still novice at faceposer need to learn more on it. and what do you mean about the gunshot part? the event was too fast?
    No, but i didn't like how the guy went airborne like he was shot out of a cannon!

  12. Post #12
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    No, but i didn't like how the guy went airborne like he was shot out of a cannon!
    ah that bit, yes that part was unrealistic, he was flipping. it was a one chance shoot because it took alot of time to setup the shot.

    that ruined it ALOT?

  13. Post #13
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    ScoutKing's Avatar
    May 2007
    6,454 Posts
    It was good, only problem is linkin park.
    I suggested to avoid all lyrics if possible, take ghosts for example, the only human sounds you hear are the two characters interacting.
    So its best to keep the human equation out of lyrics, seeing Not everyone likes the sad lyrics or someone screaming at them.
    But that two kinds of music or bans need to be avoided.

    Metal, and linkin park.


    Fast shooting scene IE firefight= Drums, and guitar.

    Sad, slow scene=Piano+ violin
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  14. Post #14
    infinitywrai's Avatar
    December 2007
    552 Posts
    So you thought like that, ok. You obviously didn't feel any emotion.

    how is there suppose to be more 'drama' to a calm song like this and also Linkin' Park aren't crap, their lyrics to all the songs have a meaning, their music sounds great too.

    this was suppose to be a calm music video not a bad ass machinima...
    Calm music video = excuse to put very little effort in movie making

    Also, find a song that might actually be considered music.
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  15. Post #15
    Dr Pepper's Avatar
    October 2008
    3,543 Posts
    Linkin' Park
    :bandwagon:
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  16. Post #16
    Exo |POW|'s Avatar
    July 2009
    472 Posts
    It was okay camera and facepose... but linkin park... no.... get out... GET AUT NAO!
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  17. Post #17
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    seems linkin' park has a bad reputation on Facepunch, just curious why do FPer's dislike linkin park?

    Edited:

    Calm music video = excuse to put very LITTLE EFFORT in movie making

    Also, find a song that might actually be considered music.

    What?! I find that very insulting! what the hell are you saying? LITTLE effort? I put alot of effort to make this music video! the SDK faceposing itself was effort cause it took alot of time to learn it, no, simply speaking everything in this video IS effort I spent one bloody week making this video and you call this little effort? you need to check your eyes cause you don't know what is effort because from what I see you only think those professional videos are 'effort' and if that was little effort, don't you think that the video would've been much more rubbish than this?

    [/rant]

    For your information sir, I consider linkin park as music and you CANNOT object ANYONES opinion you can only agree to your own.

    And YOU probably can't produce something like this, so think before you say something ok bud?

  18. Post #18
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    ScoutKing's Avatar
    May 2007
    6,454 Posts
    Calm music video = excuse to put very little effort in movie making

    Also, find a song that might actually be considered music.
    You have no idea what your talking about.

    Please, stop reviewing videos until you get to know the ropes on both sides of the issue.
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  19. Post #19
    The_Lizard_Xing's Avatar
    September 2009
    2,595 Posts
    :lol:

  20. Post #20
    DoubleHawkFilms's Avatar
    December 2009
    117 Posts
    Tonz, please just accept criticism. People are allowed to have opinions, and disliking Linkin Park is completely fine. Just because they don't like the music doesn't mean that it's not constructive criticism. If you don't get good reviews, maybe watch what songs you use.

  21. Post #21
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    So you thought like that, ok. You obviously didn't feel any emotion.

    how is there suppose to be more 'drama' to a calm song like this and also Linkin' Park aren't crap, their lyrics to all the songs have a meaning, their music sounds great too.

    this was suppose to be a calm music video not a bad ass machinima...
    Just because it's supposed to be calm doesn't mean it HAS to be. Also, you shouldn't flame or insult people when they give you criticism and then immediately disregard what they say and cry
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  22. Post #22
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    Just because it's supposed to be calm doesn't mean it HAS to be. Also, you shouldn't flame or insult people when they give you criticism and then immediately disregard what they say and cry
    Yes, I am taking constructive critisicm, im fine with the fact that you's don't like linkin' park. just when infinitywrai said little effort, that really fired me up.

    I would be flaming scoutking right now if i didn't take constructive critisicm, but im not am I?
    don't take this the wrong way, I CAN take constructive critisicm.

    but I don't think what I said was actually flaming.
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  23. Post #23
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    Yes, I am taking constructive critisicm, im fine with the fact that you's don't like linkin' park. just when infinitywrai said little effort, that really fired me up.

    I would be flaming scoutking right now if i didn't take constructive critisicm, but im not am I?
    don't take this the wrong way, I CAN take constructive critisicm.

    but I don't think what I said was actually flaming.
    You said I had no emotions. When people give you criticism, constructive or not, you not supposed to get " fired up", it's a short video, not like you spent and INCREDIBLE amount of time on it.
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  24. Post #24
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    ScoutKing's Avatar
    May 2007
    6,454 Posts
    You said I had no emotions. When people give you criticism, constructive or not, you not supposed to get " fired up", it's a short video, not like you spent and INCREDIBLE amount of time on it.
    He spent a week, and for you to say this is hypocritical seeing you have a hard time not saying "your videos shit" in reviews.

  25. Post #25
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    He spent a week, and for you to say this is hypocritical seeing you have a hard time not saying "your videos shit" in reviews.

    I find it hard to describe bad videos

    EDIT:
    Without being accused of flaming

  26. Post #26
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    You said I had no emotions. When people give you criticism, constructive or not, you not supposed to get " fired up", it's a short video, not like you spent and INCREDIBLE amount of time on it.
    What? are you seriously saying this? that is funny I said "You obviously felt no emotion then" and you HONESTLY think that is flaming?

    sorry but that is just funny.
    I can't believe you thought that was flaming.

    and excuse me, the only person I was fired up at was infinitywrai not everyone... -.-
    I think you are not thinking before you type. it is obvious that you would get annoyed for someone to say that you put little effort in your video when you truly have put in alot of effort.

    and just if your wondering, I am not annoyed at all now. (no offense intended in this post.)

    Edited:

    So you thought like that, ok. You obviously didn't feel any emotion.
    I didn't say you HAVE no emotions, I said you didn't FEEL any emotions.

    And I said "so you thought like that,OK" which show's that I'm accepting your view not disrespecting or offending you.

  27. Post #27
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    What? are you seriously saying this? that is funny I said "You obviously felt no emotion then" and you HONESTLY think that is flaming?
    Everything I say is supposedly flaming... Which is BS

  28. Post #28
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    Everything I say is supposedly flaming... Which is BS
    Your doing it again, I didn't say you were flaming.

  29. Post #29
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    Your doing it again, I didn't say you were flaming.
    I didn't say that, I said it's hard for me to tell what flaming is on this god damn sight, seeing as everyone goes "OMG U R FLAMUN NUB"

  30. Post #30
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    I didn't say that, I said it's hard for me to tell what flaming is on this god damn sight, seeing as everyone goes "OMG U R FLAMUN NUB"
    ah I see sorry, the way you typed it sounded like as if you were implying that.

    can we shake hands now? this debate is over.

  31. Post #31
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    ah I see sorry, the way you typed it sounded like as if you were implying that.

    can we shake hands now? this debate is over.
    kthx pai

    /arugement

  32. Post #32
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    ScoutKing's Avatar
    May 2007
    6,454 Posts
    Everything I say is supposedly flaming... Which is BS
    Everything you do is almost or near flaming to be honest.

  33. Post #33
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    Everything you do is almost or near flaming to be honest.
    I didn't ask for your opinion...

  34. Post #34
    DoubleHawkFilms's Avatar
    December 2009
    117 Posts
    *inserts image macro of baby shrieking with 72 point impact font saying "WAAAH MAKE IT STOP"*

  35. Post #35
    Gold Member
    ScoutKing's Avatar
    May 2007
    6,454 Posts
    I didn't ask for your opinion...
    we didn't ask for yours.

  36. Post #36
    GodlyT's Avatar
    October 2009
    143 Posts
    we didn't ask for yours.
    Stop trying to start a flame war and get me banned, the only reason I flame you is because your a constant jackass towards Fumples and I.

    /done

  37. Post #37

    November 2009
    154 Posts
    I loved this video. And people it's nothing really to do with the song or he would have asked to rate the song. Sure the walking was drawn out but you had great effects and posing. I grant you a 8.5/10 :)

  38. Post #38
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    I loved this video. And people it's nothing really to do with the song or he would have asked to rate the song. Sure the walking was drawn out but you had great effects and posing. I grant you a 8.5/10 :)
    thank you. :)

  39. Post #39
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    ScoutKing's Avatar
    May 2007
    6,454 Posts
    Well the song was OK I want to state that now, even if it is a good song IE not depressed as fuck like linkin parks usually is.
    Its just the fact its linkin park, so remember even if its a good song, look who created it.



    No, I don't like linkin park.

  40. Post #40
    ToNz's Avatar
    July 2008
    669 Posts
    Well the song was OK I want to state that now, even if it is a good song IE not depressed as fuck like linkin parks usually is.
    Its just the fact its linkin park, so remember even if its a good song, look who created it.



    No, I don't like linkin park.
    I believe Linkin' Park isn't emo, they are Heavy Rock/Rap

    just my view, no debate intended.