[Whitesinner0]

[release] HELLO! I am not new to Garrysmod, but I never was able to get a contraption done. Here is what i think my first contraption is. ENJOY![/release]

[release] Thank you for your time. And please rate and comment. And if you want a release I will give you one.
Oh Yeah, I also want to thank «ƒ»Statua Aliquis for wiring the GCX guns. And much more.[/release]

[release]Hey GUYS. I have just had enough time to edit the dune. I hope it is better than before.[/release]









[release]The seats are invisible because for a good view while in the eat they have to be really low. So they are invisible. Enjoy. And please comment and vote on the newer version if you haven't voted.[/release]

[release]Hello, I got vid up on the car.[/release]

[ShadowPhoeni]

It's boxy and boring. It's not a good contraption.

[GunskiMod]

Saw that on the server. It's not bad. Could use some improvements though.

[Whitesinner0]

Lol. I remember you Gunski. Thank You.

[Ldesu]

For being a first contraption it's really good but for being a good contraption it misses a lot of details and proportions are off.

The seats are half way trough the floor too

Edit:

Fill in gaps and make the seats actually fit in it and making your own engine out of props instead of using an engine model makes it more original :]

[Hunta]

I actually quite like it, ... apart from the turret.

My numbr 1 way 2 spot a n00b is that they must stick a turret ON EVERYTHING

[Whitesinner0]

I actually quite like it, ... apart from the turret.
My numbr 1 way 2 spot a n00b is that they must stick a turret ON EVERYTHING

The original was with out the turret. FYI. XD

Ldesu posted:

For being a first contraption it's really good but for being a good contraption it misses a lot of details and proportions are off.

The seats are half way trough the floor too

Edit:

Fill in gaps and make the seats actually fit in it and making your own engine out of props instead of using an engine model makes it more original :]

Will do. I will probably fix the changes. About the seats, its like that because of the view. But I will fix it. :)

[Balto-the-Wolf-Dog]

Beats my first contraption to a pulp. (a pathetic hoverball chopper)

The turret kinda kills it though. I like the clean one!

[Whitesinner0]

Balto-the-Wolf-Dog posted:

Beats my first contraption to a pulp. (a pathetic hoverball chopper)

The turret kinda kills it though. I like the clean one!

Gonna fix it.

[Dohner]

Please add more detail

[Bowser_nl]

The shape is alright but it looks like it isn't finished yet. Spend more time on details and clean up the holes. (and delete the turret version).

[shipkiller]

not bad at all for a first contraption

[kp3]

Change material and make the ropes and elastics invisible. Instead make a fake suspension of props, The tf2 props have 2 good springs you could use.

[Cantido]

It's ok. I'd say that it probably works well, but just isn't entertaining to the eyes. I lol'd at the poll.

[InoUBtUDntnoMe]

Oh hey Brah, this was looking good being built but you should of put more time and effort to putting more detail into it.

[MacHaddock]

Balto-the-Wolf-Dog posted:

Beats my first contraption to a pulp. (a pathetic hoverball chopper)

The turret kinda kills it though. I like the clean one!

shipkiller posted:

not bad at all for a first contraption

First GOOD contraption=/= first contraption, nobody ever understands that...


Looks cool. I like the front

[Apocalypsox]

It's good for a first contraption. No interior though, when you can plainly see inside it. and no ugly cannons on top, Please =p

[MacHaddock]

Apocalypsox posted:

It's good for a first contraption. No interior though, when you can plainly see inside it. and no ugly cannons on top, Please =p

read above.

[Frechetta93]

Whitesinner0 posted:

HELLO! I am not new to Garrysmod, but I never was able to get a good contraption done. Here is what i think my first good contraption is. ENJOY!

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Ldesu posted:

For being a first contraption it's really good...

Balto-the-Wolf-Dog posted:

Beats my first contraption to a pulp.

shipkiller posted:

not bad at all for a first contraption

Apocalypsox posted:

It's good for a first contraption.

Why must people not understand what first GOOD contraption means? Rated all bad readers.

MacHaddock posted:

First GOOD contraption=/= first contraption, nobody ever understands that...

^

[Treelor]

Hunta posted:

I actually quite like it, ... apart from the turret.

My numbr 1 way 2 spot a n00b is that they must stick a turret ON EVERYTHING

I place weaponry on everything that I make, it doesn't make me a noob. The turret on this thing does look pretty out of place, though.

[MacHaddock]

Frechetta93 posted:

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Why must people not understand what first GOOD contraption means? Rated all bad readers.



^

You go read LDesu/lawliets post again plox.

[Balto-the-Wolf-Dog]

If the turret was smaller and sidemounted i think it would be 10x better

[Madman_Andre]

Not bad, for a fir-

Ah, fuck it, It's looks OK.

[eurocracy]

It looks fine, well set out thread for a first contraption.

[Dohner]

eurocracy posted:

It looks fine, well set out thread for a first GOOD contraption.

get it right

[-Matt-94]

I couldn't find the "sloppily made" option in the poll. :barf:

[Whitesinner0]

New update coming soon.

[Whitesinner0]

New update is up.

[xroblade]

Its looking better but iv allready voted "not bad" and can't change it to "good" now.

[Whitesinner0]

Thank You.

[heathendevil]

I voted "good" for you

[PhantomEast]

i think it looks pretty good

[Dohner]

U need to put in a dashboard and make the seats visible and stuff like that to add more....non emptyness

[Whitesinner0]

Read. My first contraption.

[fear2007]

make the roof smaller it looks like its wider than the body under it.

[MacTrekkie]

Whitesinner0 posted:

Read. My first GOOD contraption.

Even YOU seem to be forgetting it. Is that one little word so hard to see?

[Whitesinner0]

Read. I know about the title. But I changed the writing in the the thread to "My First Contraption."

[BBOOBBYY!]

Quite good now, the roof looking wider than the rest of body does ruin it quite a bit.
The fuck is with the release tags :V

[Whitesinner0]

Thank You.

[kp3]

Do you know about gm_snapdegrees? If you do, great, If you don't, Then, well it makes building cars and shit easier.

It basically sets the angles you rotate stuff with the physgun while holding shift.

Just type gm_snapdegrees angle in the console.
So like: Gm_snapdegress 22.5.
or 11.25 or 6.625.