[Zeraxify]

Second scenebuild ever. It was built entirely on gm_flatgrass.
Inspired by the movie Children of Men (If you haven't see it, I strongly recommend you do.)


Compare:
http://comparescreenshots.slicx.com/comparison/24471

Original if anyone feel like editing:


Give me artistic's if you like it!

[The Combine]

They arent creating shadows :/
Would be an awesome picture if they did but it just looks a lil bit strange that way.

[ChestyMcGee]

I miss the dog.
:(

[The Vman]

Pretty cool looking. I really like the fog and the rain. My only issue is that they don't have shadows underneath them...

[Zeraxify]

I didn't have a dog model :(

Edited:

Updated OP with some shadows

[darius_bielecki]

I love that film.
Good work Zerax, a good scene build.

[JurajIsNotPirat]

Bloody Great. But too colorfull imo.

[Rastifan]

Is there going to be a threesome?

Nah kidding. Nice work there Zeraxify. Custom shadows and all. I grant thee wood.

Edited:

JurajIsNotPirat posted:

Bloody Great. But too colorfull imo.


Improved it a bit, hope you don't mind

[url]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/zerax.png[/url]

Is there going to be a threesome?

Nah kidding. Nice work there JurajIsNotPirat. Custom shadows and all. I grant thee wood.

I gonna shut up now.

[Uberslug]

The girl on the left is making a really distracting face, but it's pretty good overall.

[Santz]

Nice, I like that fog and the angle altho I think it should be cropped a little bit on the bottom to avoid showing much street but that would leave the CoM logo too high.

Nice work Zeraxify :)

[Zeraxify]

Thanks guys.

Edited:

Updated OP with a bit of tweaking. I took Juraj's advice.

[The Combine]

Very cool now. Have an arty.

[Septok]

Nice.

The burning/dodging looks inappropriate in some places, and the corpse is awkward.

[Meatbang]

Wheres the bit with the tank

[The_J_Hat]

Nice, yet the one girl(I can't remember her name or how to spell it) was black. That was a good movie.

[Zeraxify]

I know she was black, I simply was inspired by the movie to do this picture, didn't mean to exactly recreate the whole scene.

Also, expect more of these Children of Men pictures in the future :buddy:

[The_J_Hat]

Nice. I don't wanna see dog euthanasia, though. I can stand human, but no dog.

[Arvuti]

Pretty cool but the left girls faceposing is pretty weird.

[CabooseRvB]

It would have been better if the man was wearing a suit instead. :P

[Zeraxify]

CabooseRvB posted:

It would have been better if the man was wearing a suit instead. :P

Pimp suit?

[Modok]

Verry good pose

[Pjodlypoops]

Uberslug posted:

The girl on the left is making a really distracting face, but it's pretty good overall.

It's like :saddowns:

[Urbanator]

Zeraxify posted:

Also, expect more of these Children of Men pictures in the future :buddy:

Can't wait! If there anything like this, then they should be good.

[stea1th]

Looks really nice man, although your picture should be desaturated a little bit.

[Exorade]

Good editing and nice scene build.
Not very good posing.

[Zeraxify]

Exorade posted:

Not very good posing.

Huh. I've never heard anyone say that since early 2008.

Edited:

Is it really bad?

[Gmod Marto]

Looks cold. Nice job. Woody.

[Exorade]

Zeraxify posted:

Huh. I've never heard anyone say that since early 2008.

That doesn't really make a difference.

Zeraxify posted:

Edited:

Is it really bad?

It's not really bad.
But it's not really good either.

-The right side of the asian woman on the left just looks somehow akward.
-The guys hand on the girls shoulder doesn't look good either.
-And considering that the guy and the girl are supposedly walking side by side, somehow the perspective is messed and it looks like the guy is floating.

Considering the title says walking, I would have chosen a different angle to make it look like they are actually walking since it looks like their legs are not bend one bit, or at least you can't see it from this angle. Another angle would probably also have a less issue with perspective, and you could easily see that the guy is walking slightly behind the girl and that the asian woman is walking slightly further.



Disagree all you want, it doesn't make it look any different.

[Zeraxify]

Fair enough.

Edited:

Also, the picture I got my inspiration from:

[CaMpEr_DoOd]

Looks good but the original looks like dump. (I know it's not meant to look good i'm just saying)

[ChestyMcGee]

Would have been cool if you edited "GIVE WAY" onto the sign, to give it that British feel.

[Zeraxify]

CaMpEr_DoOd posted:

Looks good but the original looks like dump. (I know it's not meant to look good i'm just saying)

I know it looks shit, but that's what Photoshop is for :science:

[Wolf7040]

That's interesting. But I don't remember it raining in Children of Men, despite that everything was muddy and wet though. Something about the posing is not right either.

[blooregardo]

She's supposed to be pregnant if it's children of men

[darius_bielecki]

It was influenced by Children of men.