[AlexZebol]

[breenkiller]

i like them the cars pics were really cool

[Butthurter]

The first pic with the TF2 characters grouping has some nice posing, although I don't really like the use of simple DoF. Use super DoF. And the last three pics with the survivors and the car stunt was great.

[Srgt. Shotup]

These pics look pretty good!

[Punkrock77]

For your first poses, these are actually quite nice.

Again, don't use Simple DoF, use Super DoF. The Smoker in the 3 car pictures looks strange, but not bad. And Ellis' finger is clipping through the grenade launcher.

[CheesyMcWank]

Actually pretty damn sweet for your first poses.

[Reno360]

Christ, you either find horrible first pictures or ones that you can't believe are their first. All good criticism has been said so you sir, get a board of wood with paint on it.

[Gmod Marto]

Good work, sir.

[Reflectent]

Very very good work for your first poses.

[Uberslug]

These are great for your firsts! Hell, they're great for anything!

[stea1th]

These are fantastic for your first poses, I can't wait to see what you are going to post next.

[The Vman]

Excellent work. Especially for firsts. You look like you have some good potential. Just try to avoid using Simple DoF. It's not very good looking and doesn't look nearly as realistic as Super DoF.

[Santz]

The third angle on the car pictures is awesome.
Posing is really good man, keep this quality up :) and listen to all the guys criticism.

[Resistance777]

very good for your first.

but yeah use some super dof instead of simple

[Urbanator]

Holy crap, my first pics looked like crap compared to these. Very good work! Can only expect greater things to come. :D

[DEMONSKUL]

really fucking good for a first although i don't believe it's really your first pose,unless you watched someone else pose before trying yourself
i mean most of the time,first tries look like stuff from 2005.

[UserDerth]

This is better then mine. Fuck i gotta practice.