[108payne]

WARNING: HUGE IMAGES ARE HUGE /caps

















Edited:

Next strip will be uploaded Tuesday, so you guys have a lot of time to vote on what to do.

[Gorm]

go heal

[SlayerFin]

Aww, i thought his going to jump from the roof and make a suicide.:frown: Nah, just kidding. Go heal, QUICK.

[John Fisher]

Go heal.

[aznz888]

Go heal.

And you could really use some more depth, the Captain seems too calm considering a rocket just came out of nowhere and shot down a helicopter. And did you really need 5 pictures of the same thing?

And you could really use some grammar improvement, as well as providing more fluid reading. It seems too sketchy, too rough(as if they were robots talking, not people.) Plus, the font you're using is horrible; it's not unreadable, but it sure is a pain for the reader's eyes.

Your posing needs improvement as well; the one with the Captain pulling up the protagonist is great, but everything else is meh.

Character speech needs more emotion; the main character sounds far too calm when he sees the missile, and the Captain seems completely stiff when he informs the MC about the situation.

[Doc_Fisherman]

Check the bodies one of them could have some great weapons or a dead medic maybe a injured comrade...

[108payne]

aznz888 posted:

Go heal.

And you could really use some more depth, the Captain seems too calm considering a rocket just came out of nowhere and shot down a helicopter. And did you really need 5 pictures of the same thing?

And you could really use some grammar improvement, as well as providing more fluid reading. It seems too sketchy, too rough(as if they were robots talking, not people.) Plus, the font you're using is horrible; it's not unreadable, but it sure is a pain for the reader's eyes.

Your posing needs improvement as well; the one with the Captain pulling up the protagonist is great, but everything else is meh.

Character speech needs more emotion; the main character sounds far too calm when he sees the missile, and the Captain seems completely stiff when he informs the MC about the situation.

Becaise the frikin font I was using doesn't allow punctuation.

Edited:

oh and "is that a missile" is not said by the MC, it is an offscreen teammate

[aznz888]

108payne posted:

Becaise the frikin font I was using doesn't allow punctuation.

Edited:

oh and "is that a missile" is not said by the MC, it is an offscreen teammate

Well that sounds like your problem. Get a font that allows punctuation, then, and one that's less of a hassle to read.

[John Fisher]

Why does some of the good comics die fast? :(

[Sickle]

Because they get attacked by people in snowsuits.

Alternatively the comic-maker is now butthurt over getting his comic blammed into dust.

Good comic anyway.

+1 art.

[108payne]

sorry, been hassled over the past few days. try to get the next strip up soon.

[archangel125]

Find the pilot and skullfuck his dead body for expecting you to fastrope from so high up, and deploying you in a position the enemy can use you for target practise.

[nuri11]

You've been playing too much cod4

[John Fisher]

This thread is bullshit its just dead.

[aznz888]

John Fisher posted:

Why does some of the good comics die fast? :(

If this is your definition of a good comic, you haven't been browsing this section long enough.