[The Combine]

Just testing some lightning and improving my isolating.
C&C please


Version with Rim Lightning:
http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/2315/isolierterhuntermitriml.jpg

[Urbanator]

Wow, this is really good! I love the background. :)

[ChestyMcGee]

Isolation is really good. The ground doesn't really merge with the picture but it's okay. Good work, keep it up!

[The Combine]

Thanks guys :smug:
Yeah I rushed the background >__<.
Next time I will pay more attention at everything.

[Blah360]

The title is the only thing that bothers me. The rest is amazing.

[The Combine]

Thank you Blah360
Also thank you Chesty for telling me how you did the lightning in in DBs picture.
It helped alot :D

[ChestyMcGee]

No problem mate.

[El_Ludovich]

Wow, really good!

[The Combine]

Thanks for all your nice comments :3:
Good to hear I finally improved.

Edited:

I added Version with Rim Lightning

[Santz]

Looks nice man, nice work on the lights, they look cool and well made.
Also nice angle :> and even if the background doesnt merge with the hunter too well it looks cools anway :P

And for some reason I cant see the version with rim lights :saddowns:

[The Combine]

Hmm me too.
Gonna re-upload it.

[Hell-met]

That sky is goddamn cool.

[The Combine]

Thank you Hell-met

[Santz]

Yay I can see it now
Its soft and nice btw but it needs more on the right side of the hood, it suddently stops when the hood connects with the back of the hunter (I hope you get what I mean, my english is kinda tarded :X).

[The Combine]

Yah I know what you mean :3:
My second try at rimlightning so its still not that great :smug:

[Rastifan]

Alrightythen. I see you got the isolation part down:) Pose and light is spot on to. Artistic is in order I think.

[The Combine]

Thank you Rastifan :D

[tehMuffinMan]

I like the second picture better, good job! Have a cookie.

[The Combine]

tehMuffinMan posted:

I like the second picture better, good job! Have a cookie.

Om nom nom om nom

[exhale55]

Thanks for the background.

[The Combine]

:awesomelon:
Somebody is using it as a background! YAY

[ChestyMcGee]

Rim-lighting needs more... light. At the moment it's kind of just a dull, almost grey line. You need to duplicate the layer it's on and guassian blur it by 5-10 (assuming you are using GIMP, I can't remember what program you use. Regardless, it should be easy to achieve the same effect in PS).

[The Combine]

Thank you Chesty!
Yeah I didnt know if it would be too much rim-lightning or too less.
Added a version with more Light.

[Pjodlypoops]

Hunter is very odd, here's a good way to get a perfect hunter pose: Always have the elbows slightly bent, never have straight arms for the hunter, nor should you completely bend his elbows when crouched, try and crouch like the hunter and get a friend to take a picture and base off that
Also his head and back are way up too high

[ChestyMcGee]

Okay Combine, the light is okay but the base layer, the line, needs to be much thinner and much less opaque.

[The Combine]

Thanks DB
Well I looked up some of my Hunter Screenshots and tried to pose him like that. Was pretty hard but I think I mastered it. Thank you for pointing out the flaws in the posing. Next time Im gonna fox them.

Yeah
I did the Rim-Lightning after everything else and I got bored so its a little bit rushed. Next time ill do it after basic lightning.

[Derive4]

Add rain to the second pic and peoples' heads will explode.

[Pjodlypoops]

Ahah wow the one time i get off my fat arse and give Combine some crit other than to not post in my threads, i get disagreed. how can you disagree with advice?

And no benji/mods this won't mean i'll give shit crit i'm just surprised

[tlsaudrl2548]

Rim Lightning!
wonder how
nice posing and edit, background is coool

[The Combine]

Pjodlypoops posted:

Ahah wow the one time i get off my fat arse and give Combine some crit other than to not post in my threads, i get disagreed. how can you disagree with advice?

I didnt disagree with you :saddowns:
To show you I rate you informative.

My rain is horrible thats why its rainless :smug:

Also thank you tslasdl or whatever your name is lol.

[Rastifan]

Derive4 posted:

Add rain to the second pic and peoples' heads will explode.

Freaking good idea sir:)

[Pjodlypoops]

Yeah but Chesty(I think atleast, prolly not but he was the person posing JUST after me.) And someone(Prolly V-Man just because i got him banned because he ranted)

[The Combine]

Rastifan posted:

Freaking good idea sir:)

I think Rain wouldnt fit now.
The sky is too. . . infected lol. Its just dark but not very rainy or not?

[Pjodlypoops]

The Combine posted:

I think Rain wouldnt fit now.
The sky is too. . . infected lol. Its just dark but not very rainy or not?

Rain is cool blues and blacks, you have oranges and such, if you were going to add rain it really wouldn't fit the color scheme

[The wrong guy]

I like it.
Make more!

[Derive4]

The Combine posted:

My rain is horrible thats why its rainless :smug:

you've killed me inside...

[The Combine]

Pjodlypoops posted:

Rain is cool blues and blacks, you have oranges and such, if you were going to add rain it really wouldn't fit the color scheme

How about a blood rain lol?
Nah just kidding. Thats what I wanted to say Rain wouldnt fit with the colors.

I didnt do rain because just 1 single picture of mine had good rain in it and the others failed(Bill walking in the rain...).

Derive4 posted:

Youve killed me inside...

That means? lol.

The wrong guy posted:

I like it. Make More

Dont worry I will :smug:

[The wrong guy]

:D

[The Combine]

The wrong guy posted:

:D

Erm.
Yeah you too.
How bout some more critism about the picture?

[Derive4]

:argh: you get criticism when I get rain.