1. Post #1
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    JOAZZZ DID THE EDIT BUT YOU'LL IGNORE THIS I BET

    FUNFACTS:
    This is the first of a series
    no the hood isn't derived from thunderbirds
    im dead
    me too.

    ORIGINAL
    http://filesmelt.com/downloader/he_c..._canal0001.jpg
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  2. Post #2
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    ARR DARMA's Avatar
    July 2005
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    oh no not another human hunter

    please no funfacts or notes it's fucking stupid

    posing is pretty meh

    helicopter should be focused on more.
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  3. Post #3
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    oh no not another human hunter

    please no funfacts or notes it's fucking stupid

    posing is pretty meh

    helicopter should be focused on more.
    1: i used male_09's facemap, what the hell's your major malfunction
    2: i can add them if i want, you're not in control of me
    3: explain
    4: why? it's not intended to be the focus of the picture
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  4. Post #4
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
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    Posing is meh. Helicopter wouldn't probably fly that close to a bridge due to the risk of crashing into it.

    Overall meh, nothing special. I would also like to know what he edited.

  5. Post #5
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    ARR DARMA's Avatar
    July 2005
    1,633 Posts
    1: i used male_09's facemap, what the hell's your major malfunction
    2: i can add them if i want, you're not in control of me
    3: explain
    4: why? it's not intended to be the focus of the picture
    waaah mommy a man on the internet gave me critisism that i didn't like so i trolled and flamed him waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

    (User was banned for this post ("Flaming" - Uberslug))
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  6. Post #6
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    waaah mommy a man on the internet gave me critisism that i didn't like so i trolled and flamed him waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    give me crit not trolling
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  7. Post #7
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    ARR DARMA's Avatar
    July 2005
    1,633 Posts
    give me crit not trolling
    I did.

    Notes are stupid
    Human hunter is fucking old and annoying.

    I didn't notice the helicopter until someone pointed it out.

  8. Post #8

    July 2009
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    Wheres the helicopter?
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  9. Post #9
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    Hunterdnrc's Avatar
    August 2008
    11,155 Posts
    Wait I think I see it...yeah, I can barely see a chopper
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  10. Post #10
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    Dubeard's Avatar
    March 2008
    7,518 Posts
    bland
    no action going on
    looks like the trucks are parked and he's just standing like a statue
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  11. Post #11
    The Combine's Avatar
    July 2009
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    Can somebody please show me the helicopter? I cant see it.
    The Trucks need Motion Blur and the dead Combine looks out of place but the posing on the human hunter is very good(but the model is overused).
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  12. Post #12
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    Can somebody please show me the helicopter? I cant see it.
    The Trucks need Motion Blur and the dead Combine looks out of place but the posing on the human hunter is very good(but the model is overused).
    stop hopping on the bandwagon.
    also the trucks are not my problem, dars edited it,
    the helicopters at the back are you blind.
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  13. Post #13
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    August 2008
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    FPSDARS DID THE EDIT BUT YOU'LL IGNORE THIS I BET
    This is why people treat you like a dickhead. It's because you treat us all like dickheads.
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  14. Post #14
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    bland
    no action going on
    looks like the trucks are parked and he's just standing like a statue
    so being chased by 2 trucks both trying to run you over and brutally murder you isn't action?

    Edited:

    This is why people treat you like a dickhead. It's because you treat us all like dickheads.
    wow, everybody seems to be flaming now,
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  15. Post #15
    RAVEPANTIES
    Dubeard's Avatar
    March 2008
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    so being chased by 2 trucks both trying to run you over and brutally murder you isn't action?
    I don't see how a parked truck can hurt you.
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  16. Post #16
    The Combine's Avatar
    July 2009
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    stop hopping on the bandwagon.
    also the trucks are not my problem, dars edited it,
    the helicopters at the back are you blind.
    Dude id be happy if you could tell me where the fucking choppa is im a lil bit color blind (maybe put a circle around it or something).
    But you improved on your posing thats good to see.
    Well but if you want to have good pictures the trucks are your problem I guess.
    But again its very nice to see that you improved.

  17. Post #17
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    August 2008
    27,033 Posts
    wow, everybody seems to be flaming now,
    Really? Way to quote my post that wasn't even a flame. I didn't call you a dickhead, I said you treat us like dickheads and people treat you like a dickhead in return. That isn't flaming at all.
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  18. Post #18
    Skipan's Avatar
    April 2008
    368 Posts
    so being chased by 2 trucks both trying to run you over and brutally murder you isn't action?

    Edited:



    wow, everybody seems to be flaming now,
    They don't even look like they are moving first of all. The idea of them driving down there is stupid because they'll just get hit by an incoming train. Dead combine is out of place

  19. Post #19
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    the buildings in the bg!
    also i can't make the trucks magically blur INGAME, i did no edits

    Edited:

    They don't even look like they are moving first of all. The idea of them driving down there is stupid because they'll just get hit by an incoming train. Dead combine is out of place
    i can't make them magically move,
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  20. Post #20
    Skipan's Avatar
    April 2008
    368 Posts
    the buildings in the bg!
    also i can't make the trucks magically blur INGAME, i did no edits

    Edited:



    i can't make them magically move,
    Well....It's official, you can't take criticism and you will probably never improve

  21. Post #21
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    ARR DARMA's Avatar
    July 2005
    1,633 Posts
    hey guys, deathbucket is back to his old ways, get the pitchforks.
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  22. Post #22
    RAVEPANTIES
    Dubeard's Avatar
    March 2008
    7,518 Posts
    Sure thing boss, the sharp one or the axe?

  23. Post #23
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    ARR DARMA's Avatar
    July 2005
    1,633 Posts
    wait
    axe on a pitchfork with new torch extension.

    go make some

  24. Post #24
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    Don't lower yourself to his level, be mature.
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  25. Post #25
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    June 2007
    5,436 Posts
    The helicopter just looks like it blends in with the apartments

  26. Post #26
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    December 2008
    2,566 Posts
    alright, a helicopter does not fly at such a low altitude. it wouldn't follow the human dude into the god damn tunnel, it flies over the tunnel. you should've moved it backwards and higher a little. also, the picture does not make sense. why would two trucks be on a train track? the metro police on the ground is just random and should be taken out.
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  27. Post #27
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    January 2009
    2,336 Posts
    his face looks weird and as stea1th said, helicopters or any other type of aircraft dont fly at such a low altitude.

  28. Post #28
    Miyamoto's Avatar
    July 2009
    286 Posts
    The image is just unimpressive all around.

    The subject matter is uninteresting. The posing is stiff with no illusion of movement - you describe it as "running from mercenaries" but I see little if anything implying any of the subjects are actually in a state of motion. The combined faceposing and slumped appearance of the main subject gives him a confused and blank look that says, "I just got out of a comfy chair and can't remember what I got up to do". The models themselves are a poor choice, and the 'editing' appears to consist of little more than a quick pass of the blur tool.

  29. Post #29
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    The image is just unimpressive all around.

    The subject matter is uninteresting. The posing is stiff with no illusion of movement - you describe it as "running from mercenaries" but I see little if anything implying any of the subjects are actually in a state of motion. The combined faceposing and slumped appearance of the main subject gives him a confused and blank look that says, "I just got out of a comfy chair and can't remember what I got up to do". The models themselves are a poor choice, and the 'editing' appears to consist of little more than a quick pass of the blur tool.
    That's nice considering i never edited it

  30. Post #30
    The Combine's Avatar
    July 2009
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    That's nice considering i never edited it
    He mainly talked about the posing and the feeling of the picture.

  31. Post #31
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    He mainly talked about the posing and the feeling of the picture.
    Bleh if i make another based on this Hood character it wouldn't be a chase scene, probably like him walking away as cops rush to a nearby dead cop as the hood's pocketing a gun.
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  32. Post #32
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    June 2009
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    -posing isnt bad, but it looks like he is sneaking rather then running.
    -The cars dont looks like their moving, i think you should of used people instead.
    -The camera angle isnt that bad, theres just alot of wasted space.
    -The 'Hood' has some nice lighting, so well done there.
    :) hope that helps.
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  33. Post #33
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    -posing isnt bad, but it looks like he is sneaking rather then running.
    -The cars dont looks like their moving, i think you should of used people instead.
    -The camera angle isnt that bad, theres just alot of wasted space.
    -The 'Hood' has some nice lighting, so well done there.
    :) hope that helps.
    Good to know that the Posing on hood was done well, i spent about half of my time with this napping/taking pictures in numerous poses

  34. Post #34
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    December 2008
    8,241 Posts
    He couldn't possibly be looking at the cars with his head at that angle. At the most all he would see is the inside of his hood.
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  35. Post #35
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    He couldn't possibly be looking at the cars with his head at that angle. At the most all he would see is the inside of his hood.
    He's looking in the direction
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  36. Post #36
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    August 2008
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    He's looking in the direction
    Of the inside of his hood/some wall off-screen to our left.

  37. Post #37
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    Of the inside of his hood/some wall off-screen to our left.
    You never know there could be an enemy near that wall
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  38. Post #38
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    BeAR!)'s Avatar
    August 2009
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    Oh no some parked trucks are chasing me! whats the combine doing on the floor is he sleeping? posing is ok on hunter /man though
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  39. Post #39
    Firemasheen's Avatar
    October 2009
    468 Posts
    Oh no some parked trucks are chasing me! whats the combine doing on the floor is he sleeping? posing is ok on hunter /man though
    Being punched in the face then being chopped in the neck by a free runner-y guy isn't a laughing matter

  40. Post #40
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    June 2008
    26,038 Posts


    I tried... Lol large tracers.
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