1. Post #1
    BartinMuus's Avatar
    July 2009
    202 Posts


    Im still working on the muzzleflash. Anything else wrong, than that? Thank you, c&c.

  2. Post #2
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    Weißes rose's Avatar
    August 2007
    645 Posts
    could use work on posing

  3. Post #3
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    ChestyMcGee's Avatar
    August 2008
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    Again, muzzleflash needs to be brighter and be giving off more light.

    The camera angle is really terrible.

  4. Post #4
    Srgt. Shotup's Avatar
    August 2009
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    The motion blur on the stuff in the explosion looks pretty good, though.
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  5. Post #5
    BartinMuus's Avatar
    July 2009
    202 Posts
    What is a good camera angle? Please tell me :)
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    ChestyMcGee's Avatar
    August 2008
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    What is a good camera angle? Please tell me :)
    One that isn't from so far away we can't actually see any of the characters and one that doesn't leave so much wasted space.

  7. Post #7
    BartinMuus's Avatar
    July 2009
    202 Posts
    Okay, thanks :)
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    masterfgh's Avatar
    January 2007
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    Posing isn't very good and the blur is ugly. Also, what's up with that title? It doesn't make any logical or grammatical sense. I think what you meant is "Amerikanische Truppen!".
    Trupfen isn't even a word, don't ever trust the google translator.

  9. Post #9
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    Timebomb757's Avatar
    February 2008
    4,749 Posts
    Posing on the machine gunner is awful. Explosion looks alright though.

  10. Post #10
    BartinMuus's Avatar
    July 2009
    202 Posts
    mastergfh, sorry about that, i've had german in school for 3 years, buuut... im not that good. But dont worry, i dont use Google :)
    In case people havent seen, the MG'er has gotten headshot :)