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PredictableMead Thusic
I MADE THE PICTURE JOAZZ DID THE EDIT
The young woman walked down the street, all of a sudden she was grabbed, and so was the cop nearby, the Gang members prepared to rape the woman and then slowly brutally murder the officer, when a bottle rolled down the street, and two powerful car headlights turned on *KCH-T!* *TCH-TRR!* "YOU THREE, YOU BETTER LEAVE HER ALONE" "FUCK YOU MAN!" *CRCK* Went the first gang member's spine as the darkly dressed man grabbed him "OW OW OW!" *PTOP-TST!* Went his belt as he was forced against the wall and was instantly snapped, and dropped dead there on the spot, the other had a fist pushed through his skull, the final hooded member was stabbed in the shoulder and pushed against the wall "You're gonna die punk. RUN FOR YOUR LIFE LADY" Then the officer drew near, spent 4 seconds watching the two fighters stare, and he then walked down and out of the street to the sounds of a thug being murdered.
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Now that looks like concept art for a Max Payne game...
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I HAD To use faith. Alyx would be shit
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I'm not happy with the edit though... :frown:
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The perspective of the lightning is wrong.
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Did you not read the red text? i can put it in braile for you if need be.
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Ok, it's for joazzz not for you deathbucket!.
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Nobody cares about your childish accusations.
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How "wrong"?
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It's a good pose, deathbucket.
Love the edit Joazzz.
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Thug gon get RAEPD
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It's behind one building and infront of another.
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Well I don't, because:
-The lamp post's light effect looks VERY messed up.
-The lightning failed.
-Too much contrast on the left.
-Rain drops aren't good.
But thanks anyway :haw:
:confused:
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Added story
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I made an edit of it too, pjodlypoop said it was okay.
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Let meh see.... For Deathbucket: The lady wouldn't run away, they'd beat the shit out of him, arrest him, and ask her to stick around. Posing on the cop on the right looks strange. Faith is running strange, and you should really get a different model. Maybe I don't know...Download one?
For Joazz, it appears the lightning is on the wall, the rim lighting seems out of place, but i really like the rain drops. The splashes look a little off, but that might be me.
Overall: It gets a C.
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Nice.I made an edit of it too, pjodlypoop said it was okay.
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The editing is fairly terrible.
Your isolation is poor, if not entirely non-existent.
The dodging and burning makes no sense.
Splashes don't look like that, and they should be influenced by lighting; all of yours are exactly the same brightness regardless of the light they are in.
Your lighting makes no sense.
The lightening is incredibly ugly.
Posing and camera angle are quite decent.
Hairy I love your edit... apart from the rim-lighting that makes no sense.
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Hairy, I love how the filename is Deathbucketedit. The blood from the knife(?) looks nice. Rain is nice, but the rimlighting is meh.
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*FaceDesk*
Joazz
*Facedesk*
Made
*Facedesk*
THE
*FACEDESK*
EDIT !
*Headbleed*
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facedesk?
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Why do you get so acted up? People know that Joazzz made this edit. Even if it might've passed some people you can just sit back, relax, shut up, and think about how much criticism Joazzz must take. And, oh yeah, that's some shitty editing.
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Seriously how many acounts is Deathbucket owning?
The posing is bad as always.
Why the fuck are there lying toxic waste bags on the ground? Pretty senseless.
The edit is very very weird.
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Honestly... Facepunch needs to start banning IPs...
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banning an ip is less effective than banning an account.
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True but it would stop this multi account business to an extent...
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Pretty good! :)
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fixed.
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Well, it takes like 5 seconds to reset your IP..
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What about the port?
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Can you get back onto the pic?
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what pic, i see nothing
wait nevermind i see it now. it's horrible. i don't like the editing and the posing is shit.
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Refresh the page
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I actually quite like the guy on the left's posing and face posing. Barney has no faceposing from the looks of it, and the cop is somewhat... Awkward, but I still get the point you put across for the cop. The woman looks like she's running weird, but other than that it's a good picture. Nice concept.
Hairy's edit is my fave, though :D (Yes I know, JOazz!!ZZ!Z *Facedesk*)
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I did try and facepose Barney but anything except mild hinting and his fucking flexes break and a black box sticks from his chin
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He was talking to me, man. Everyone knows I made the edit.
But please, next time put jpeg_quality to 100 and don't use lamps and such, I can add the lighting afterwards. Makes it much easier.
Edited:
Would be much easier to take it if people would give the criticism like "improve" more than "it's shit, get better".
You're right though...
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Why do they leave bags full of biohazardous waste just lying in an alley?
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-Well... Looks to me like someone has been beating Barney and the thug with stick of burntool, which doesn't look very good.
-Posing is ok, though the running girls torso is way too much to the left where as her ass is way too much to the right. I think that's a very uncomfortable way to run.
-The cop looks like someone covered his head and shoulders partially with plastic wrap, which doesn't look that good either.
-Small clipping issues like the thugs fingers going through Barneys hand.
+Rain looks ok, though it's a bit shallow and blocky.
=Finally, it's a nice idea but posing and editing are both to be blamed for the low quality of the shot.
How to improve:
Use more time on posing. If in the end yourself notice that something is wrong, go back and do it again.
Lighten your use of burn tool, the use of tool in this pic is way too heavy as in you can easily see the spots where you used the tool.
Also try to find a good way for yourself to make some good looking rain effects, until then I'd advice you to leave them off.
And that's about all I can say.
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This looks so bad i cried. Posing is boring and unrealistic, and editing is beyond any failure.
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Am I allowed to?
I think I am.
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/2249/muchfail.jpg
Dumb x 6
Artistic x 3
Bad Spelling x 1
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Agree x 1
Funny x 1
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