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"Srg. Kolovski and I move out to a report of a German sniper that has been picking off our men. As we ascend the stairs, we hear the crack of a rifle, and the pinging of the bolt pulling back. I signal to Kolovski to hold behind me as I make my way to a corner in the stairwell. Footsteps. I hold my Thompson around the corner, and pull the trigger. The rest, is history..."
This is my second edit to a screen shot of mine. Some basic rimlighting and shadows, along with color adjustment. Enjoy! (C&C Welcome)
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The lighting is okay. I want to know what the heck those Americans are doing with their weapons though.
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It looks quite nice! Great job.
In your description it says the commander signaled to his comrade. Perhaps you could have posed his elevated hand in a firm hold or something.
The way the characters are holding the weapons look somewhat awkward. Maybe consider refining those poses a bit more.
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what they're doing is firing blindly around the corner, and the German doesn't know it.
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Rated artistic. I can't find any flaws. There's no clipping what so ever, and posing seems natural.
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haha they look natural, apart from the fact the two americans look like they're looking at their weapons wondering what they do.
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Exactly. And as we all know, in that kind of situation, you can't really hold a rifle out straight, so he's gripping the barrel and the butt (Out of frame.)
Thanks guys.
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dont you mean Nazi
calling him a "German" implies that he is in some way human
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Ohhh, ok, that makes sense now.
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Posing on German is good, but the American soldier...UGH!! But you can't help that, it's the retarded physics.
Artistic x 4
Dumb x 1
Disagree x 1
Agree x 1
Funny x 1