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Hey,
This was supposed to be a unmodified picture, but I couldn't help myself.
I quite like the way it came out, though there's something wrong with Jessica's face, but I can't put my finger on it =/
Photoshopped:
Original:
http://juraviel.miumau.net/Random/1%...s_Original.jpg
Other angle:
http://juraviel.miumau.net/Random/1%...2_Original.jpg
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Mumumumumuuuuh
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Excuse me?
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I think hes lost for words...
Good picture however!
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Would have been funny if they made such a noise . :D
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I bet :)
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Very good :D
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Quite nice. Me like.
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Lesbians :q:
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Good job! I like the angle and the blue burst from the top. Keep it up!
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HEHEHEHEHEH theyre making out...ommmg
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wowa...rated art, and agree
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O_O
Lovely! Might make this my bg. xD
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I wouldn't really call it "heavily photoshopped".
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Weapons, blood, mayhem and murder doesn't even raise a eyebrow. But two girls kissing (and well done to I might add) sends half the Facepunch community in to stuttering muteness:)
Well a bit of an exaggeration, but still.
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It's good, though I don't see a reason why they aren't kissing instead of going for it.
Nice to see some variety in the screenshot section once in a while.
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If they went for it, Alieni had to put it in the smut section:P
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First of all. Thank you for all the positive comments everyone :)
Second. The reason they're not kissing, is that I think it's way more exciting to give a hint of what is to come than to show it right away. Maybe that's just me :)
That's flattering, thank you ^^ I'm glad you like it so much.Kefka123 posted:
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It would be better if you took the image from the other angle and used the effects you did on the first one, but without the sun glare.
Then, it would be perfect.
Until then, I don't like the first image because the sun rays are overkill. Imo.
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And I even masked some of the flares away...
Thanks for your constructive criticism :)
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Well, yes, the rays in general are nice--but I am referring to that blob of light over the second girl's face.
I rated you artistic, by the way. :3
Detailed analysis
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why don't you use [IMG][/IMG]?
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Wow. I've never got _that_ detailed comment. Thank you for your effort.
Some funny facts:
1. The most annoying thing for me in this pic is actually Elexia's (the girl on the left) lips. They look horrible. Though I also noticed Jessica's lips which, as you commented, are pwned by source engine (other possibility might be that I just suck with the face poser)
2. As you also noticed, they aren't posed face-to-face. This is simply because Elexia has way too big breasts to be able to get her nose anywhere close to another persons face without leaning forwards :P
Oh by the way. I'm editing the next screenshot in this "series"
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No collide on breasts then. I use it if body parts gives me lip:) What matters is what shows on the screen anyway.
I would have used Zoey instead of the dark hair model. Elexis is it? Her face is flexible enough to get where you want. Never mind the quality. An old pic and no editing. Lousy with Photoshop:)
http://filesmelt.com/downloader/122.jpg
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Hiya,
Alright, new screenshot is ready. I'm nowhere near as satisfied with this, as I was with the first one, but it shall do, as I've spent most of the day figuring out new ideas for the picture, but couldn't come up with anything nice.
Original:
http://juraviel.miumau.net/Random/1%...u_Original.jpg
You might need to crank up your monitor's brightness abit to see it properly. My other monitor (the one I edited it with, seems to have unusually high brightness)
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Howdy, Dude, :clint:
i've been looking at your picture for some time now and while i do believe, your photowhooping is awesome, the posing somehow dissapointed me. Usually, i just point that out and leave it with that.
But...:
It's very different from the usual generic crap around here. That's a major Plus Point and i haven't posed yet with these models, so i couldn't understand the full potential of these models. I cannot really critise, if i don't know all possibilties or flaws and it would have been a waste of your effort to just give my comment without any own experience.
So i downloaded the ragdolls, started up G-Mod and re-created your picture in some way to see, if and how it could have been improved somehow.
This is what i finally came up with, within 3 hours of work.
http://old.filesmelt.com/Imagehosting/pics/8ee2e55566057970569fdc69820a018c.jpgIt's not so good whooped like yours and i propably won't be so good like you in a short time.
But the point this, in terms of posing, both body and face, it could have been better .... alot.
I read too late, you intended this "almost touch of lips".
Instead, i've made an actual kiss but during the main work, i tested this "teasing moment" of yours and still there would have been a better way to pose their mouthes, makeing them look more realistic / romantic. Right now, this looks more like a kiss of friendship. (Except this "mood" was also intend from you.)
Another thing, the upper bodies:
I understand, you had issues with clipping and body contact but as you can see, it's possible to pose 'em very close and still avoid (visible) clippings.
To sum it all up:
There is a great potential in your picture and it's just sad to see that the effort of photowhooping is just given away by a low demonstration of posing. It hurts even more, due to the fact of being "outside of Facepunch-Box."
I'll give you a Rainbow for it because at the end of the journey, there will be gold(-status).
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Thank you so very much REH_BlackJack <3
Wonderful and useful comments. And I also like how you didn't tell me "l2 pose nub" :) I shall take your criticism and hopefully get better at posing characters.
I think my biggest problem is that I don't put the necessary care and time in posing the characters. Also, finding a right angle is hard for me. For the first picture I divided my time between posing and photoshopping around 30/70 For the second picture it was probably 10/90
I love your screenshot by the way. Without argument it's a lot better posed than mine and also, with that good posing, I don't see any need for further photoshopping. There's alot more feeling in it than in mine.. or let's say passion :) It might be good "2 seconds later..." picture ;P
There's only one thing wrong with it, that I can see. And it's the thing you were trying to demonstrate for me. You see, I _know_ Jessica has breasts and from that picture it seems that she absolutely does not have anything on her chest :) Of course it might be that they are pressing themselves together so hard that her breasts are simply flattening abit.
Oh well.. I'll try to improve my posing ^^ And once more, I'm very thankful for your comments :)
P.S. What do you think of my second picture? I think the faces are abit better in that atleast.
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Not much to see, not even on the original. Even if i turn up my brightness, it's hard to figure it out.
The say a general word: It's not much better but also not much worse.
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That's weird. I'll have to kick the brightness up a notch then.
Here we go.
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Friendly x 2
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