1. Post #1
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    Now, here's where things will chronologically progress, as a sort of long story, and I know it's a long read but don't be lazy. Trust me when I say it's more work to write these than to read them.

    Pronunciation: Oo-ruh-lozen Sheh-loo-kah

    Urulozan's Discovery

    Urulozan She'lukah was a Vortigaunt poet and writer who began growing in popularity due to his beautiful poems describing nature, and his seemingly first hand experiences with some of the deadliest creatures in all Xen Space. His writings often required for him to spend many long weeks living in the wilderness studying a creature he wishes to write about. In the Xen spring of 2242 B.C.F. Xen Years, Urulozan found a structure unlike any he had ever seen. It was an obscurely shaped metallic structure that seemed to have forced itself into the dirt. On one end of the structure was a broken transparent barrier revealing the hollow innards of the structure. Within the structure Urulozan found a creature unlike any he had ever seen. He saw that whatever it was, was gravely injured. Urulozan proceeded to drag the creature to his temporary living area, a cave in the nearby mountain range. He did his best to patch up the creature's wounds, he found it to be odd that given the size of some of the wounds there wasn't much blood escaping them. Urulozan began taking notes on the creature's physical appearance for future reference. His descriptions were as follows:

    • Two eyes, Two legs, two arms, five fingers and toes for each hand and foot
    • Pale skin, two nostril holes on the face, short sharp nails, lean figure
    • Bone supported frills lining vertically from the forehead to the back of the neck
    • No apparent mouth, but slight epidermal difference on lower face
    • Pale pearly violet eye color/eyeball
    • Gill-like appendages on the facial cheeks
    • Foreign fabric and armor worn by specimen
    • The blood samples that were gathered were a red color and contained a black substance within it (refer to later)

    Days began to turn into weeks as Urulozan waited for the creature to awaken. In fact, a total of two months had passed before the creature finally woke up. Urulozan recalls the creature as 'seemingly emotionless'. The creature struggled to sit up but Urulozan assisted the creature to do so. The creature sat looking at Urulozan for several minutes (he assumed it was studying him) and after a long silence the creature spoke in fluent Vortigese, startling and stunning Urulozan simultaneously. The creature apparently had said "Greetings". Urulozan replied "What are you?" The estranged creature proceeded to tell Urulozan that it and its people refer to themselves as The Malignai a sentient race on a planet far from Xen Space. The following months was a major research project for Urulozan, as he nurtured the creature while its wounds healed.

    Urulozan was told many things about the creature and its people, he even learned that its name was Surectus Archer and that he was a mapmaker for his people. Surectus described how his craft crashed due to a malfunction, most of which Urulozan barely understood but neglected to say so, but sensed Surectus expected as much.

    Things seemed to had taken a darker turn as Surectus remembered a device he was carrying on his ship. A small mechanical device that went missing some days prior to the crash. Surectus described it to be a weapon of some sort and if found it must be destroyed. Surectus never told Urulozan what the device actually did but emphasised the importance of its destruction. A few days later Surectus was completely healed. He said his farewells despite Urulozan begging him to stay to learn and reveal more. Urulozan's wishes were ignored seeing as Surectus wished to find a way home. About a year later, Urulozan revisited the site where Surectus' craft had crashed but was disappointed to see that most of it was stripped down and overgrown with foliage. Urulozan also revisited the cave he and Surectus had stayed in for so long, though by this time it too was derelict. Although, Urulozan discovered what he believes to be the journal of Surectus Archer. Unfortunately the symbols within it were unfamiliar to Urulozan as it was not any form of Vortigese or any other language throughout Xen. Urulozan published his notes and findings for the public to read claiming it to be and titled it as a 'Non-Fictitious Interview with a Malignant'. Skeptics claim that this was mainly an advertising gig to sell his story and claimed the "Malignai language" was nothing but "creative babbling", but still compliment him for his imaginative stories. Surectus was never seen by Urulozan or anyone else ever again, nor have any remains of a creature described in Urulozan's notes ever been recovered.




    Previous Vort Tales:

    Myrmidont Taming:
    http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=811824

    Kunetuk Mu'Hei:
    http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=777296

    Colonel Mejshrafir Shi'lutoi:
    http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=775721
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  2. Post #2
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    you're on a roll man, keep it up.

    Actually thinking about it now, you should absolutely work on a comic for this kind of thing. Hell make it a movie if you can.
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    I think this is one of the best installments yet. Bravo.
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    you're on a roll man, keep it up.

    Actually thinking about it now, you should absolutely work on a comic for this kind of thing. Hell make it a movie if you can.
    I feel reluctant to do so, but at the same time I want to. I just don't know if I would be able to keep it interesting. Plus, it's getting complicated using Ep.2 maps and trying to get angles without human structures. Now if I had some Xen maps (like if Black Mesa: Source came out) then I would have a field day. Anyhow, I will consider it, and possibley add more meat to the story for that kind of thing.

    'Preciate the comments.

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    Piece of art.
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    Beautiful.
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    Oh my sweet jesus, this is beautiful, you sir have won yourself a colorful pallet.
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    Nice. Another pallet to your collection.
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    i spot houses in the background

  10. Post #10
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    i spot houses in the background
    Indeed.

  11. Post #11
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    I feel reluctant to do so, but at the same time I want to. I just don't know if I would be able to keep it interesting. Plus, it's getting complicated using Ep.2 maps and trying to get angles without human structures. Now if I had some Xen maps (like if Black Mesa: Source came out) then I would have a field day. Anyhow, I will consider it, and possibley add more meat to the story for that kind of thing.

    'Preciate the comments.
    This wouldn't work as a comic, only a story board.

    Main reason is that you explain and characterize each picture with a story. In a comic, we'd have to do it ourselves, and we wouldn't set the right scene you did.

    And anyway, each picture feels like a comic, backed up with the story.

    Great stuff man!
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    This wouldn't work as a comic, only a story board.

    Main reason is that you explain and characterize each picture with a story. In a comic, we'd have to do it ourselves, and we wouldn't set the right scene you did.

    And anyway, each picture feels like a comic, backed up with the story.

    Great stuff man!
    It could potentially be in a pseudo-documentary style. But I suppose you're right.

    Thanks everyone!
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    Yeah I love the fact you charactize pictures and give emotion to them. It's really art.
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    i spot houses in the background
    Oh Snap!
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  15. Post #15
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    The story is very articulate and well told, and the edit is another welcomed addition into my Gmod folder.

    Great work as always Ben.
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    The story is very articulate and well told, and the edit is another welcomed addition into my Gmod folder.

    Great work as always Ben.
    Thanks. :D

    Also, How're the maskless CP's coming along?

  17. Post #17
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    Thanks. :D

    Also, How're the maskless CP's coming along?
    All hope was lost until I found Fakefactory's website. He has the very first edition of Cinematic mod which is where most of those facemaps came from.

    I should have them ready in the next few days.
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    That's a great story
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    I feel reluctant to do so, but at the same time I want to. I just don't know if I would be able to keep it interesting. Plus, it's getting complicated using Ep.2 maps and trying to get angles without human structures. Now if I had some Xen maps (like if Black Mesa: Source came out) then I would have a field day. Anyhow, I will consider it, and possibley add more meat to the story for that kind of thing.

    'Preciate the comments.
    This might help you. It has a couple of Xen maps that might be useful to you. I've used them for my own stuff, and they work for what you'd need them for.

    ON THE PICTURE, it really is one of the best ones so far. Keep it up!
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    This might help you. It has a couple of Xen maps that might be useful to you. I've used them for my own stuff, and they work for what you'd need them for.

    ON THE PICTURE, it really is one of the best ones so far. Keep it up!
    Wow! Those would do wonders!
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  21. Post #21
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    I smell District 9 for some reason.

  22. Post #22
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    I smell District 9 for some reason.
    I don't see why. :/

  23. Post #23
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    Ben, i kinda missed a lot of your stuff, can you summarize the whole series/novel w/e it is in 3 sentences?

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    Ben, i kinda missed a lot of your stuff, can you summarize the whole series/novel w/e it is in 3 sentences?
    The only ones I can really explain in short are the story related ones, the habitual one are kind of hard to summarize, for me at least.

    A Vort colonel invades Thoopnik [a three foot tall semi-sentient tribal race] territory abusing all the prisoners, under the Nihilanth's command. Kunetuk Mu'hei, a kind hearted Vort under the command of The Shaman Council was sent to end the abuses. His pleas were ignored by the colonel.

    And if you wish for greater detail; here's the previous threads, I'll add them to the OP for other people too: :D

    Myrmidont Taming:
    http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=811824

    Kunetuk Mu'Hei:
    http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=777296

    Colonel Mejshrafir Shi'lutoi:
    http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=775721

  25. Post #25
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    just for the backstory you deserve an arty
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    Thanks. :)

  27. Post #27
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    By far one your best Vortigaunt write ups yet. I hope to see more soon, and see where exactly you take all this. And more importantly, how it will end.
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  28. Post #28
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    By far one your best Vortigaunt write ups yet. I hope to see more soon, and see where exactly you take all this. And more importantly, how it will end.
    At this rate, it is going to be a long time before this ends.