[Hairybastard]

Well it sucks..

original http://filesmelt.com/downloader/de_nuke0011.jpg
comment and all that shit.

[ulterior_motives]

lens flare ruins it

[The Vman]

Random-light-so-you-can-add-rimlighting much?

Laser's pretty good, but the blood could use a lot of work (it's too bright, and needs motion blur to make it look less like you just scribbled with the paint tool.




And seriously wtf is up with that light?

EDIT

Whoa just noticed some major skeletal errors on the ducking guy's shoulder (prop posing I assume?)

[Santz]

Like with the zombies, the random light killed the pic. The other effects look nice, and the pose too!

[Fort83]

Hairy I think the white outline, whatever the term is, is alittle too thick. I've noticed it in some of your recent pictures and it looks alittle too thick, makes it look like its cut and pasted.
Besides that, the picture is pretty cool, though lens flare is kinda oddly put. Either way have a paint plate thingy. Nice use of Turok soldiers and nice lazer guns, where did you get them.

[Hairybastard]

Yeah I think I should lay off the rim light for a while, I've been ruining all my latest pics with rim light
Thanks for the crits tho guys.
ps: I'm not the guy who rated you dumb.. Just wanted to say it cuz it looks like it could be me

[JurajIsNotPirat]

Yay, random lensflare and unreal rimlight.. do not STROKE IT! ..rim light it :)

[Mrfantasticool]

Your rimlight is to hard... It looks more like a hard egded brush outline... It needs to be softer.

[The Combine]

I think if the rim lightning would be smoother the picture would be great!

[Zeraxify]

The rim lightning ruins it.

[Hairybastard]

I didn't stroke it, I used the dodge tool :c

[ChestyMcGee]

I think the rim-lighting needs more glow... or to be taken out of the picture entirely. Laser wound is pretty cool, although the blood might be a tad too bright considering how dark the rest of his back is.

[Talishmar]

Damn they're close to each other.

[Hairybastard]

Talishmar posted:

Damn they're close to each other.

Yeah the dude getting shot was rushing him....... Wow this picture is a complete failure D:

[Carne]

Inspired by District 9?

[ChestyMcGee]

Carne posted:

Inspired by District 9?

It would need more exploding dude if it was.
:P

[Hairybastard]

Carne posted:

Inspired by District 9?

Actually yes

[Fort83]

This picture isn't complete failure. Only some

[Billiam]

Your rim lighting isn't soft enough.

[DEMONSKUL]

he's firin his lazor....
had to say it
:P

[Hairybastard]

DEMONSKUL posted:

he's firin his lazor....
had to say it
:P

immafirinmahalzor.jpg :p

[DEMONSKUL]

Hairybastard posted:

immafirinmahalzor.jpg :p

XD

[Hairybastard]

Well, I am done doing rimlights, check out my totally fucking awesome UI!!!

[Santz]

That could be a kick ass gamemode!

Nice pic mate! The explotion is kinda weird but rest is good :]

[DEMONSKUL]

You nearly fooled me....thought it was a real game

[The Combine]

I tought thats some Warhammer game lol.
Nice picture mate!

[Fort83]

Where did you get the guns from? they look familiar but I cant quite put my finger on where i have seen them before.

[Hairybastard]

Fort83 posted:

Where did you get the guns from? they look familiar but I cant quite put my finger on where i have seen them before.

bf2142

[Fort83]

Ah yes 2142. Did you port them yourself or did someone release them and I missed it...

[Hairybastard]

Fort83 posted:

Ah yes 2142. Did you port them yourself or did someone release them and I missed it...

A friend did it. Sowwy

[Fort83]

Bummer :( their awesome guns

[markfu]

Damn, I was requesting those guns all of last year. Oh well. Anyways the second picture is good, but in the first one I don't think lasers make people bleed.

[The_J_Hat]

-snip-

[Hairybastard]

Thanks for the crits guys

[The_J_Hat]

You're welcome.

Edited:

Nice posing, blood is too bright, rimlighting? It's nice.

[Hairybastard]

The_J_Hat posted:

But I was reffering to Markfu's post about lazers don't make people bleed.

shoulda quoted him
Anyways, I changed my post too.

[The_J_Hat]

Thanks for the heads up.

[Super_Toast]

There is a very small sun in the corner that is causing a lens flare.

[Helter]

dude i think its awesome

[Santz]

Helter posted:

dude i think its awesome

DONT LET THE RIM LIGHTNING CONSUMES YOU THE WAY IT DID WITH HAIRY~!! DONT GIVE IN!!!1

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Ok now more serious, Why you love Benji Hairy~? ;o