[Sottalytober]

I love Harley Quinns lines. Editing probably sucks, but meh.

Alternate Version

[Bloodwork]

Blood could use some highlights and shadows in it to give it a non dusty look and posing seems a lil off

Also could use some face posing on both (if harley does have it on her dunno my model wont work)

[Sottalytober]

Bloodwork posted:

Blood could use some highlights and shadows in it to give it a non dusty look and posing seems a lil off

Also could use some face posing on both (if harley does have it on her dunno my model wont work)

Harley's got zero faceposing, and i'm bad at blood in Photoshop. I just reinacted what i thought getting shot in the face would look like, and i posed it after that. If you could further explain what you mean by shadow and highlight the blood, i'd be happy to try :)

[Bloodwork]

like the sunlight hitting the blood creates white spots (light reflecting) and dark spots (blood shadowing on blood) so try to give it some highlights in it, unless the blood is on the camera it will have more shades of red then 1

[Sottalytober]

Bloodwork posted:

like the sunlight hitting the blood creates white spots (light reflecting) and dark spots (blood shadowing on blood) so try to give it some highlights in it, unless the blood is on the camera it will have more shades of red then 1

I see, let me try to re-edit.

Semi-Better?

[Bloodwork]

yeah a lil better still a lil bit of blurry blood, I saw you posted this up in the edit my SS thread so I went ahead and tried still not happy with it but hey


Toned down the muzzle flash a lil, toned down the blood a lil

[Sottalytober]

Bloodwork posted:

yeah a lil better still a lil bit of blurry blood, I saw you posted this up in the edit my SS thread so I went ahead and tried still not happy with it but hey
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn138/bloodwork769/fixedmaybecopy.jpg
Toned down the muzzle flash a lil, toned down the blood a lil

Thanks! Wasn't sure how big the muzzle-flash was supposed to be for a handgun, and the blood looks decent. Much better then mine.

[Bloodwork]

eh it was a quick job but i was bored lol you got her holding a 9mm(or something close) so really i dunno i'm not a gun expert but it would be little to no muzzle flash.

[Santz]

The guy is bleeding strawberry jam

[DevonV2]

That muzzleflash is horribly small in bloodworks version. Have you ever fired any sort of pistol before?

[Bloodwork]

Devon lets see the bullets about 20 feet away, its a SMALL pistol... like I said it would be little to NO muzzle flash. Question is have you ever fired a pistol?

[aznz888]

it needs a lot of work... it's not a bad idea, but there's aspects of this picture that are incorrect. the muzzle flash should be smaller. you need some AA, and the blood looks brushed on. there's blood brushes(if you're using photoshop) online if you need them.

[Sottalytober]

aznz888 posted:

it needs a lot of work... it's not a bad idea, but there's aspects of this picture that are incorrect. the muzzle flash should be smaller. you need some AA, and the blood looks brushed on. there's blood brushes(if you're using photoshop) online if you need them.

I can tone down the muzzle-flash, AA is up to 6, and, when i tried the blood brushes i currently have, it looked like it was on a completely different layer, but i'll keep looking.

[The Vman]

Bloodwork posted:

Devon lets see the bullets about 20 feet away, its a SMALL pistol... like I said it would be little to NO muzzle flash. Question is have you ever fired a pistol?

I have and it spat out a 3 foot flame (Was a Taurus 38. Super)

Picture is pretty bad overall. Camera angle leaves waaaaay too much empty space, and has no cinematic quality. Lighting of the map is boring and doesn't fit the scene at all. Posing is pretty stiff.

And why the hell did you pick Harley Quinn? She just looks random.

[Reno360]

I'm not going to give one of my crazy realism comments so....
Good Try =D

[Sottalytober]

The Vman posted:

I have and it spat out a 3 foot flame (Was a Taurus 38. Super)

Picture is pretty bad overall. Camera angle leaves waaaaay too much empty space, and has no cinematic quality. Lighting of the map is boring and doesn't fit the scene at all. Posing is pretty stiff.

And why the hell did you pick Harley Quinn? She just looks random.

Well, that hurts. Oh well, C&C appreciated. And it's Harley because she says those lines in one of Batman episodes. I pictured it in my head and this was born.

edit: It was in the episode Joker's Millions

[PILLS HERE!]

The ferrari's suspension is too low

[Bloodwork]

The Vman posted:

I have and it spat out a 3 foot flame (Was a Taurus 38. Super)

Question tho was it that big with the bullet 20-30 feet away? also what grain did you use I never seen a small pistol throw out 3 foot flash

[The Vman]

Bloodwork posted:

Question tho was it that big with the bullet 20-30 feet away? also what grain did you use I never seen a small pistol throw out 3 foot flash

Well the bullet was in the target as soon as the flash dissipated... so yea. And I'm not sure of the grain (didn't care to check)

[Bloodwork]

kk its def no biggy lol i was just wondering cause a 3 foot flame on a 38 is irregular, my 32 barly flashes at all, and actually no flash is visible unless its night

[Kung Fu Jew]

Bloodwork posted:

Devon lets see the bullets about 20 feet away, its a SMALL pistol... like I said it would be little to NO muzzle flash. Question is have you ever fired a pistol?

That's not 20 feet, and what are you on about muzzleflashes? Muzzleflashes are put in action poses to make it look like things are happening, this isn't action-realism or a realism pose, pretty obviously.

The Vman posted:

I have and it spat out a 3 foot flame (Was a Taurus 38. Super)

Picture is pretty bad overall. Camera angle leaves waaaaay too much empty space, and has no cinematic quality. Lighting of the map is boring and doesn't fit the scene at all. Posing is pretty stiff.

And why the hell did you pick Harley Quinn? She just looks random.

How do you know it was three feet? Did you measure?

Bloodwork posted:

kk its def no biggy lol i was just wondering cause a 3 foot flame on a 38 is irregular, my 32 barly flashes at all, and actually no flash is visible unless its night

A little flashing is visible in daytime but you have to pay attention. Muzzleflashes appear for fractions of fractions of seconds, it is very hard to spot them, and when you do, you catch them in varying forms. Daytime or nighttime.

[The Vman]

Kung Fu Jew posted:

How do you know it was three feet? Did you measure?

I could tell it was big from my view, but I had someone with me who had a better view. He said 3 feet, and I could totally believe him from what I could see.

Also
http://i779.photobucket.com/albums/yy79/Decimator1/derailed.jpg

[Kung Fu Jew]

Oh and Bloodwork, the pistol isn't a low caliber, that's a .45, the pistol from L4D which everyone should recognize. ^ is correct though - the picture is pretty dry looking, the muzzleflash looks too gassy, the blood, like you said, looks pretty odd, and the posing is a little wonk.