[Fear57]

She was breathing lightly, he could feel it. As Zoey slept, he wondered what would become of the world. Was this the end? Is this how they would spend their final days? Trapped here? He held her closer, fighting back tears. He looked at her. She didn't need this in her life, but it happened. He thought of his family, the family that he once had now gone forever. Zoey was all he had now, he had to protect her, but he knew that sooner or later the infected would get in. This was the end...and there was nothing they could do about it.

[bodenlan2]

She's dead

[ChestyMcGee]

Pervert.

[Uberslug]

Fear57 you are a scary person.

[Hunterdnrc]

I have to agree with Slug, although, it is nice to see how much your improving, high five :D

[Mrfantasticool]

Hunterdnrc posted:

I have to agree with Slug

A lot.

[Back_Slash]

shes near his crotch you know what that means...
:a2m:
god this emote is useful.

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

I expected something much more comical.

[The Vman]

Am I the only one who doesn't see this as a pervy or creepy pose? I actually like it, the posing is really solid. I just think the camera angle could be better.

[Fear57]

The Vman posted:

Am I the only one who doesn't see this as a pervy or creepy pose? I actually like it, the posing is really solid. I just think the camera angle could be better.

:buddy: No, you're not the only one. Trolls just don't read the story and play the music.

[Mrfantasticool]

Fear57 posted:

:buddy: No, you're not the only one. Trolls just don't read the story and play the music.

I pretty much closed the music as its title says "Gothic"

[ChestyMcGee]

And heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere cooooome the dumb ratings!

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

Fear57 posted:

:buddy: No, you're not the only one. Trolls just don't read the story and play the music.

Nah, I like it. Just the title made me think of it differently.

[The_J_Hat]

Kinda creepy.

[Resistance777]

Fear, Im finding you very creppy now

[Novangel]

I'd like to view this as an artistic piece, but...
it's creepy.

[stea1th]

Great posing, looks really natural man.

[Cashfury]

Twilight creepy pedophile? Wow, Edward Sparkle pants is LOUIS!? YES I HAVE A REASON TO KILL LOUIS!

Any who, Zoey is getting awfully close to Louis's crotch.

Bow wow wow wow!

[Lagitech]

This would be a cute pic if Zoey wasn't so hot

[PopLot]

Yawn. Your poses are boring.

[Domino]

Uberslug posted:

Fear57 you are a scary person.

Scary? What do you mean scary?..


And no.. There is nothing perverted about this..
She is laying her head on his chest.. NOT his crouch.. -_-
And even if she was laying her head on his crouch, it wouldn't be perverted..
Grow up please...

[Cashfury]

Domino posted:

Scary? What do you mean scary?..


And no.. There is nothing perverted about this..
She is laying her head on his chest.. NOT his crouch.. -_-
And even if she was laying her head on his crouch, it wouldn't be perverted..
Grow up please...

"Daddy where do babies come from?"

*Giggle*

[Lexinator]

i cried sort of, nice work and the story was good.

[Talishmar]

...and there was nothing they could do about it.

Except speedrun!

Edited:

Back_Slash posted:

shes near his crotch you know what that means...
:a2m:

Always.

[ChestyMcGee]

Boring camera angle is boring.

[lickface]

after :a2m:

[The Combine]

With editing this could have been an epic picture.
But it just looks not done.


May I have the original plzthx?
Want to edit this.

[ChestyMcGee]

Fear, I'm gonna guess you rated me dumb for saying the camera angle isn't very good.

Regardless of whether you did or didn't, you really need to work on your camera angles. You have been posing for nearly a year and a half now and you very rarely have a picture with an interesting camera angle.

[The Combine]

Lol who the fuck rated me disagree?
I just asked if I can have the original.

@Chesty
Whats so bad at that camera angle?
Could you PM me a good Camera Angle tutorial?

[ChestyMcGee]

You can't really teach people how to do good camera angles.

Problems with this one (from other people's problems, you can work out how to improve):

Too high up.
Too much wasted space.
Nothing but wall and concrete (this could be considering wasted space, but there really needs to be some more props; a sleeping bag, some weapons - anything!).
The characters are really cut off. This is a consequence of all the wasted space at the top of the picture.

[The Combine]

So the main thing at camera angles are dont waste space?

[ChestyMcGee]

Yeah I guess.

[Deri102]

The pic is good, He does look a bit weird though



QUICK!!! RAET ME DUMBZ OR TEH WURLD WILL EXPLOD!!

\/ DUMS GO HEER

[Mrfantasticool]

I'm pretty much wondering... Everyone that said it was creepy got 1-3 dumbs, who said its good got an agree.

Did Fear rate us dumbs/agrees??

\/Dumbs down here.

[The Combine]

Dunno lol
How can he rate multiple times?

[Deri102]

The Combine posted:

Dunno lol
How can he rate multiple times?

F5+Rate, repeat

[The Combine]

lol I want to try on my post


Edit:Doesnt work you can just rate one time

[Deez_Nutz]

i got hard by looking at this please make a sex pose next time thank you

[GoldenGnome]

"date rape pills here"

[Domino]

The Combine posted:

So the main thing at camera angles are dont waste space?

Wrong.. To know how to make awesome camera angles, you really must see the scene as you wore there, and how you want the action to come forward.. (Look at some of my threads, the once that I have created, not edited)

Also you should look at this, it WILL help everyone: http://www.trustedreviews.com/digita...ion-Part-1-/p1