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    NateLB's Avatar
    March 2007
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    meh, random Idea I had. I guess this is kinda a comic?





    close up








    (without blood splatter)


    (with blood splatter)











    and the cliff hanger.



    Well... tell me what you think and stuff I need to improve on. also... it would be cool if someone could edit some blood effects to when hes getting shot (thats why I had two pics)

    Thanks for looking
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    Dennab
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    Wouldn't this be a comic?

    Anyway it looks nice an all.

  3. Post #3
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    NateLB's Avatar
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    well it doesn't really have a plot or climax so meh.
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    Really good, the posing is greatly done, and the story is clear.
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    Could have done your own blood. The 'cliffhanger' thing is just stupid. Faceposing when he's turning toward them is kinda silly or exaggerated.

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    NateLB's Avatar
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    Could have done your own blood. The 'cliffhanger' thing is just stupid. Faceposing when he's turning toward them is kinda silly or exaggerated.
    well I was going to have him get up and shoot the two CT's and walk off and bleed out... but I said fuck it too much work. The face posing when he is turning around is because he is mentally insane. I also blow ass at photo editing.

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    Using DoF helps in your screenshots at certain parts.. to access it just go to the post-processing.

    But overall those were nice pictures

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    Lol @ the 5th frame facepose.

    As for the end: dun Dun DAAAAA!!!

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    well I was going to have him get up and shoot the two CT's and walk off and bleed out... but I said fuck it too much work. THe face posing when he is turning around is because he is mentally insane.
    Who ever said mentally insane people made super exaggerated facial expressions?

    More likely, they'll be blank.

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    Then if he made his facial expression blank, someone would bitch about lack of faceposer.
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    He could have at least made it look less 'hurr durr everyone with mental problems has the inability to control their facial expressions.'

    Would have looked better with a simple smirk.

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    NateLB's Avatar
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    Ok... hes angry, he does not want to be taken in, he wants the cops dead to.

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    Why did I lol?

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    Doesn't look angry.

    Looks constipated.

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    I like it, but the blood is just

    uh
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    Those SWAT guys suck. Double tap to the back of the head would have been the real way to do it, not half a mag in his chest.
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    Those SWAT guys suck. Double tap to the back of the head would have been the real way to do it, not half a clip in his chest.
    They aren't SWAT, and why do you think they used a half a magazine?
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    They aren't SWAT, and why do you think they used a half a magazine?
    Then who the heck are they? Armed police don't wear gear like that.
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    Who says they are police? The model is SEAL Team 6.
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    Who says they are police? The model is SEAL Team 6.
    So you said "oh they're not SWAT so that explains why they fired loads of rounds like poorly trained simpletons"... and then you add to that by saying that they are one of the most highly trained fighting units in the modern word? The Navy Seals? That just doesn't make sense.
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    That's not what I said. I asked you why did you think they used half of their magazines. There seems to be one or two bulletholes in him.
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    The amount of blood and the size of the entry wounds suggest otherwise. Also, because there are two pictures of them firing, I naturally assumed that the firing was going on for some times.
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    The blood was probably just overdone, and that's probably a decal mod he has. The two pictures were 2 versions of the same image, one with/without the blood splat.
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    For a comic, you should have reduced the amount of pictures ^^
    I can't look at the whole comic right now, as I'm at work, but what I see is that you should reduce the amount of images used :P

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    He stabs mud to death! LOOK OUT HE'S SHOOTING MUDPIES!!!!!
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    The faceposing in the last picture is epic.

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    He stabs mud to death! LOOK OUT HE'S SHOOTING MUDPIES!!!!!
    whut?
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    It's okay. Nice posing.

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    The amount of blood and the size of the entry wounds suggest otherwise. Also, because there are two pictures of them firing, I naturally assumed that the firing was going on for some times.
    Two pics, one with out blood splat one with blood splat, they only fired around 3 shots each. They didnt want to kill him just stop him. They are also supposed to be police.
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    That might've killed him, unless he was on serious drugs.
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    Humans can survive small caliber rounds and quite a few, a cop got shot in the face point blank with a 9mm and still got up and got to his car.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X14ID3zybSk

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    Fluke.
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    Humans can survive small caliber rounds and quite a few, a cop got shot in the face point blank with a 9mm and still got up and got to his car.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X14ID3zybSk
    Yes but his heart didn't explode.

    Bullet could have missed anything vital in his face.

    WHEN THE SHOT IS OVER THE HEART

    IT WILL HIT THE HEART

    AND THEN THEY DIE
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    Yes but his heart didn't explode.

    Bullet could have missed anything vital in his face.

    WHEN THE SHOT IS OVER THE HEART

    IT WILL HIT THE HEART

    AND THEN THEY DIE
    There is no blood IMPACT decal over the heart mind you.

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    My god that video was... holy fuck im speechless.

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    Dennab
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    Humans can survive small caliber rounds and quite a few, a cop got shot in the face point blank with a 9mm and still got up and got to his car.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X14ID3zybSk
    I've seen that. D-8>
    Woman also took a shotgun round to the face and lived.

  37. Post #37
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    My god.
    Really thats just wrong.
    Killing somebody because he tells you to turn your music lower?

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    This is actually good

  39. Post #39
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    My god.
    Really thats just wrong.
    Killing somebody because he tells you to turn your music lower?
    that's how some bling bling raptards are....
    they think they can piss on the law because they got a gun and blingz...
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    that's how some bling bling raptards are....
    they think they can piss on the law because they got a gun and blingz...
    uh lol, he was a career criminal

    Edited:

    He most likely had some real big warrants on him