1. Post #1
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    Tell me what you think, give me tips and pointers on how I can get better :D

    Edited:

    I KNOW ABOUT GRAPHICS BTW /caps
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  2. Post #2
    Dennab
    June 2009
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    no AA, very boring, not much posing or anything
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  3. Post #3
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    yea it didn't take very long to pose just a quick one because I'm pretty tired.

  4. Post #4
    NaziCookie's Avatar
    June 2009
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    looks like hes reaching for a wallet

    Here has a Late just cause
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  5. Post #5

    July 2009
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    Child does not looks tasty enough.

  6. Post #6
    Dennab
    August 2009
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    Wow what the fuck guys? It's not bad. I would have made something to signify what killed him though.
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  7. Post #7
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    January 2009
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    Ya need to upgrade the graphics

       very emotional   

  8. Post #8
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    Thanks for all your compliments and pointers

  9. Post #9
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    August 2008
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    It's hard to convey serious emotions like this when the thing I notice most about the picture is the poor AA.

  10. Post #10
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    yea if i turn on AA my PC will probably rape its self :(

  11. Post #11
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    August 2008
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    yea if i turn on AA my PC will probably rape its self :(
    Oh well. It's a shame that AA is so damn necessary on the Source Engine. The posing in the picture looks good btw.

  12. Post #12
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    Oh well. It's a shame that AA is so damn necessary on the Source Engine. The posing in the picture looks good btw.
    Thanks..if anyone wants to edit this feel free to, not that anyone would..but just incase! :P

  13. Post #13
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    It looks like he's giving him a blow job... NECROPHELIA INCEST!
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  14. Post #14
    Ryzo's Avatar
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    It looks like he's giving him a blow job... NECROPHELIA INCEST!
    wow...just wow.
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    I have a sick mind.
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  16. Post #16
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    yes, yes you do.
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  17. Post #17
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    January 2005
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    I know you have been told about the shit graphics, but I'll just tell you what I have been told. When you are done posing/making the scene, just turn your settings all up anyway. Doesn't matter if you run like 5 fps, you only need 1 frame for the picture.
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  18. Post #18
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    August 2008
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    Try using some Post-Production effects to dramaticise the scene a bit more. Maybe some blood effects on the body and the kid and the floor to confirm the death.
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  19. Post #19
    Ryzo's Avatar
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    Sounds like an idea! :D

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    Looks like he's sniffing his ass. 0_0
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    Or my post, but whatever.

  22. Post #22
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    Pvt. Martin and The_J_Hat you both have sick minds. :lol:

  23. Post #23
    grog guy's Avatar
    August 2008
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    Not much of a hug, if you ask me
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  24. Post #24
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    Well I could of called it "child hunching over dead dads body." but that doesn't seem as emotional.
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  25. Post #25
    grog guy's Avatar
    August 2008
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    Yeah I agree with that

  26. Post #26
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    Pvt. Martin and The_J_Hat you both have sick minds. :lol:
    I blame Rocky Horror Picture Show.

  27. Post #27
    Ryzo's Avatar
    August 2009
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    orly?

  28. Post #28
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    Really.

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    A deranged transvestite travels to Earth to make the perfect man to sleep with. Really.

  29. Post #29
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    Dennab
    June 2009
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    It's just a ragdoll slumped over another ragdoll.


    I shall keep this messy piece of wood for another day.
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  30. Post #30
    "Breen is watching you..."