1. Post #1
    DiKey's Avatar
    August 2008
    199 Posts


    C&C PLS

  2. Post #2
    Gold Member
    ARR DARMA's Avatar
    July 2005
    1,633 Posts
    Bad lighting, not to great fingerposing, the blur doesn't look that smooth, and DEAR GOD WHY THE ANIME EYES

  3. Post #3
    Moobz's Avatar
    April 2005
    68 Posts
    The muzzle flash looks too cartoonish and the blur in the background looks like a motion blur where a gaussian blur would look more suitable (assuming you use photoshop). The lighting looks okay but dodgy in some places such as the hand (you literally burned the hand?) and sleeve. Just needs more practice.

  4. Post #4

    July 2009
    781 Posts
    I would've liked a normal citizen model better. For one, because of the calmer-coloured clothes, and secondly and more importantly, fingerposability.

    Also either the hands are also low-poly or you haven't amped up your graphics for the screenshot. Do so.

    I'll have to second the eyes. Puppydog eyes and shooting don't go together, soz.

    I really don't like the muzzleflash either, way too cartoony.

    it's not like completely utterly useless, but it does have a multitude of small flaws.

  5. Post #5
    Gold Member
    TheWarnman's Avatar
    January 2009
    1,155 Posts
    Personal skin? If so this should be in the personal skin section.

  6. Post #6

    July 2009
    3,317 Posts
    I would've liked a normal citizen model better. For one, because of the calmer-coloured clothes, and secondly and more importantly, fingerposability.

    Also either the hands are also low-poly or you haven't amped up your graphics for the screenshot. Do so.

    I'll have to second the eyes. Puppydog eyes and shooting don't go together, soz.

    I really don't like the muzzleflash either, way too cartoony.

    it's not like completely utterly useless, but it does have a multitude of small flaws.
    I really like the way you criticize things.

  7. Post #7
    Noteloc's Avatar
    October 2008
    380 Posts
    It's not personal, its public :3
    (2 Posts above^^)

  8. Post #8
    Moobz's Avatar
    April 2005
    68 Posts
    I really like the way you criticize things.
    And the way he takes it :D

  9. Post #9
    bodenlan's Avatar
    May 2008
    610 Posts
    bad

  10. Post #10
    DiKey's Avatar
    August 2008
    199 Posts
    lol the anime eyes, were not my intention.

    @bodenlan ok, make it better!

    blur on the hand is a little fault on editing.

    I make all editings with photoshop and the dof was make with motion blur(a right? sry im not sure)

    Yes its my personal skin, but this skin is a "beta", this skin is wip.

    Eh my graphics are all on high, but the hands are badly because they are from hl2.

    The muzzleflash ar my intention, i should be comic or others, ya ^^

    ARR Darma: why there are bad lightnings, show me.

    DIkey

    EDIT: sry for bad english

  11. Post #11
    I'm a loner who likes to get beat up at school
    Zeraxify's Avatar
    June 2009
    11,579 Posts
    It's okay. Just work on your posing.

    Edited:

    I mean editing.