[zlap]

[Everest]

you're gonna need to upload that to an image hosting site, we can't see images saved to your machine

use imgur.com if you're cool with a ton of jpeg compression

[zlap]

Everest posted:

you're gonna need to upload that to an image hosting site, we can't see images saved to your machine

use imgur.com if you're cool with a ton of jpeg compression

how can i resize?

[Joazzz]

not bad otherwise, but please don't use that muzzleflash

[zlap]

Joazzz posted:

not bad otherwise, but please don't use that muzzleflash

ok and thx

[Ham_Wallet]

Facial expression is almost blank. What is all that stuff around him? Muzzle flash is too bright and small. That gun has a muzzle break on it so the vertical flashes would be coming out of the slots on the muzzle break. Not at the tip. Posing otherwise is ok.

[The White Kid]

I like it, certainly not the best. He looks rather bland for firing a weapon, the muzzle flare is too small, no shell casings ejecting, and the motion of the scene doesn't quite make sense for me as most of his body is still with the swooshing background, yet i see a stagnant brick wall in the back. Also, for the muzzle flash, a good rule of thumb is that for a pistol or handgun sized weapon the muzzle flash should be relatively the same size as the weapon, for rifles it should be about half the size of the weapon, and shotguns have a more spark flare like muzzle flare.

[BruceySpruce]

The posing on the hands looks a bit tight and close together but the general editing is done really well

[toto4314]

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD BUT DON'T USE THAT MUZZLE

[zlap]

toto4314 posted:

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD BUT DON'T USE THAT MUZZLE

thx

[nsdw5005]

머즐플래쉬가 좀 작네요. 그리고 현실감을 살리기위해서는 머즐플래쉬의 크기를 늘려주시고 모션 블러 효과를 사용해보세요.

That Muzzle is small. If you want Appeal to Realism, expand Muzzle and Use Motion Blur.

[I AM THE LAW]

nsdw5005 posted:

머즐플래쉬가 좀 작네요. 그리고 현실감을 살리기위해서는 머즐플래쉬의 크기를 늘려주시고 모션 블러 효과를 사용해보세요. .

what's up with this?

[zlap]

I AM THE LAW posted:

what's up with this?

i don't know

[Drsalvador]

Good Christ, the color matching is horrendous. Pale blue-green and harsh light-gold like that really do not match, and the JPEG compression makes it look like a Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff pic.