[King7]

Comments or Criticism please.

Also, eh kind of a scene build, depends on what the definition means to you.

[Golgo 13]

Could do with a bit of editing and lighting, and I can't tell what's going on, apart from what the title is telling me, however, posing doesn't look too bad.

Not bad, in all. Just lighting improvements are needed c:

[King7]

Golgo 13 posted:

Could do with a bit of editing and lighting, and I can't tell what's going on, apart from what the title is telling me, however, posing doesn't look too bad.

Not bad, in all. Just lighting improvements are needed c:

Thanks! But I don't think the lighting would make the picture better since I cant use the High Quality Shadows. :c

[Golgo 13]

King7 posted:

Thanks! But I don't think the lighting would make the picture better since I cant use the High Quality Shadows. :c

A bit of atmospheric lighting helps, and the shadows, just follow them word for word, I had a bit of difficulty with them at first, but then I got them going.

[RainBD7]

Reminds me of All Quiet on the Western Front.

"Forgive me, comrade; how could you be my enemy? If we threw away these rifles and this uniform you could be my brother just like Kat and Albert."

[King7]

RainBD7 posted:

Reminds me of All Quiet on the Western Front.

To be honest, that part of the book inspired me to make this scene.

[Prototype556]

Lighting could be a lot better, He's also hunched over too far, making it look weird. Also, did he pose the american like that after he died? Or did he just happen to fall like that?