[Prototype556]

http://screenshotcomparison.com/comparison/56984

Wasn't too happy with how it turned out, little mistakes, little mistakes everywhere.

EDIT: Replaced with Joazzz'(es?) edit.

[Joazzz]

the lightsabers look bland. you should look into editing bloom effects, all you need is a layer with the right blending mode (does PS have one called 'Screen'?) and soft brushwork

[Viper123_SWE]

My only complaint is that some of the CT's got really stiff posing. (Two guys in the center, leftmost guy as well.)

Other than that it's a okay pose, good concept though.

[Prototype556]

Viper123_SWE posted:

My only complaint is that some of the CT's got really stiff posing. (Two guys in the center, leftmost guy as well.)

Other than that it's a okay pose, good concept though.

I was trying to simulate how restrictive the armor is. Guess it didn't work out.

[Zak McKracken]

I would also rework the pose of the fifth guy(starting from the left side), It doesn't look natural.
Good work anyway.

[ScottyWired]

"This armour is so fucking itchy"

[BruceySpruce]

The only posing problem I can see is the last trooper on the right, in the back. Just looks a little awkward holding the gun.

But otherwise the lighting is great and the poses are pretty spot on. Do you do mostly in game tweaks?

[Prototype556]

I was trying to copy this stance a little, but I should have pulled it up higher so his forward arm could bend a little more.



And about the in-game edits. It really, really depends on what it is. Sometimes, like this one, it's mostly just lighting with color corrections (which I think I might have toned down the vibrancy on this one too much) and small edits.

EDIT: Updated OP with new edit.

[Luxuria]

This new edit is a lot better! I love what you did with the rim lighting on the clone in the back.

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

why'd you feed it through a sandpaper filter

[Joazzz]

RustledJimmys posted:

I love what you did with the rim lighting on the clone in the back.

thanks i worked hard to make it look right

Edited:

Ninja Nub[NOR] posted:

why'd you feed it through a sandpaper filter

i like grain sometimes
fight me irl

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

sand paperrrrr

in this case it looks bad
i mean the edit otherwise looks good, but then there's the ugly grain that ruins everything

[Joazzz]

kk i'll make it more subtle next time

Edited:

oh goddamnit to hell i forgot the sharpening filter kill me

Edited:

Prototype556 posted:

I was trying to copy this stance a little, but I should have pulled it up higher so his forward arm could bend a little more.



And about the in-game edits. It really, really depends on what it is. Sometimes, like this one, it's mostly just lighting with color corrections (which I think I might have toned down the vibrancy on this one too much) and small edits.

EDIT: Updated OP with new edit.

funny how the CGI clones are almost perfectly photorealistic while Yoda looks fake as hell