[Prototype556]

Credits:

Me - Posing
Me- Almost all of the shading, color changes, and editing that didn't have to do with sfx.
Cheesecurls - Flare, light beam, shadow on the top right, and shading around the foot.

Original Comparison: http://screenshotcomparison.com/comparison/56811

[bloocobalt]

That's some damned good editing.

[AFewOstriches]

Some wonky finger and faceposing, and the tan concrete is illuminated by white light instead of the Chinook's blue tinged spotlight.

Aside from that this is pretty cool, I like that flare.

Edit: looking at it, the chinook doesn't have an angle on that piece of concrete. Still looks a bit odd.

[Prototype556]

Thanks. I do need to get better at face posing. I've never ever used it, as I've had no need for it. I was suggested to use it, and while it still looks better than before. . . It's lacking.

EDIT: oh I know what it is. See, the map I posed this on has its own weird filter, and the reds came out very washed out and odd looking. That light is being castes by a red light I out by the flare to help it look like it was lighting up stuff around it, including the marine holding it. Oh well.

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

you should pose all of their hands, the guy aiming out of the place with his hand unposed around the grip and the one holding the mag without
you know
holding it
looks really odd

[Prototype556]

Again, just silly mistakes I made rushing (for no real good reason other than patience levels) to get to the editing part. Thanks for pointing the errors out.

[FlatPancake]

Focusing at the guy who is on the floor and aiming his AR to the left of the screen, what is going on with the shadowing on the concrete directly above his head? Was that an attempt at shading with some forgotten isolation?

[Prototype556]

Indeed.

[Joazzz]

the lens flare sucks. why is it so strong but so small? loving the rest though

[VaciliNikoMav]

Excellent work all around in my opinion, but I will agree with everyone; you just need to work with your finger posing and then you're all set.

[Joazzz]

oh and Prototype, always isolate before shading until you become super precise with it. i can see some shadow bleeding around the right edge of the wrecked window frame

[Prototype556]

Yeah, that was pointed out already. I'll try that next time.