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What I meant to say was, awesome picture!
Looks like the guy in the bottom right is saying "i'm here for you"
Or "what the hell are you doing get back over here"
Or "make some room i want to aim too"
Excellent rain.
The guy running in the middle of the screen doesn't show any indication of the green light that's lighting up half the scene. Posing's alright, but that rain looks pretty nice.
Posing is "okay". Not great, most of it looks awkward. Nice rain though.
Very great use of the Blacklight troopers ^^
Fixed it.
In the actual scene both the commander and second guy are well past the tunnel where I have a green lamp, but it didn't quite work along with general atmosphere I guess.
Appreciate your help mate.
"Okay" and "Awkward" are actually quite far apart.
Very helpful indeed.
Okay and "okay" are also two completely different concepts.
The posing isn't great*, it looks awkward. The rating is okay, and the way it actually looks is awkward.
Love it, keep it up Bear!